Alpha Damien Reviews

It was a great book and it kept my attention and waiting to see what happens next. It was tragic but at the end happiness came. I really love this book and I can’t wait to see what the writer comes up with next. I love how the story started out because it wasn’t like the other books that I have read. You can see where the writer took time to build the story and it had a few mistakes but it was still a good book

This book has me torn. The abuse is something hectic, I really don't know why it would be something that needs to be incorporated. I honestly don't see how a person who has endured this much would accept the bond with that kind of monster. I mean she tried to unalive herself at one point, but still hoping for him to change his way and accept the bond as well as her. I honestly don't know how I got this far with what I've read, it's honestly quite triggering.

It is exciting ,heart wrenching, infuriating and more. Very worth your while to read. There were times I cried for Ariel and the abuse and how hard headed Damian was. He was so dang cruel. I loved that at times she stood her ground and stood up for herself. She didn't give up on herself and her love. I do wish Damian came to his senses earlier in the book. I was so angry he blamed her for her parents deeds. I did feel bad for Williams. He just loved the girl he grew up with for a while. He just took it to far. All in all a great book

The story is addicting and the characters of Damien and Ariel are well discribed. But there are many mistakes made in the names which makes reading difficult sometimes….Ariel is sometimes even called Elle or Audrey. Some things written in the story never come back er are never explained. For example: the moon goddess shows up in front of Ariel saying that she must go to her house where she was born to find answers….but that fact never returns in the story. Enemies turn into friends very quickly also…the writer sometimes lost it there for a bit. But I still enjoyed it very much

Love it! ! ! ! . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . .. . . .

It's kinda heartbreaking. She has only one person in her corner. I can't count how many times I've come to tears whole reading this story. Only on character 41. I really do hope she gets a break, because no one deserves the torture this poor girl is getting. Damien needs to open his eyes and see that what he is doing to her is wrong and stop. Elle just needs to go away, and all of the head maid should be punched in the throat.

On the beginning it was different. But then the name mix ups happened and it seemed like the writer lost his story line a bit but at the end it was really good again. What really didn’t make sense was that Damien and Williams both lost their minds at some point. I guess it captured my interest because I really wanted to finish the novel .oh one more confusing part was that Ariel was able to mate with Williams but was also Damien’s mate.

I loved this book so much I wish there was more chapters I hope more stories like this will be written I would really love to read a lot more books like this hopefully they won’t end so fast. There was a few errors in this story tho a few times names where mixed up but it was still a very good book just maybe try to make less errors and check the writing for errors and it would make the stories much better