Alpha Damien Reviews

Poor Ariel. Damian should suffer for all the unnecessary pain he is causing her. She is not responsible for her parents actions. He could have sent her away long time ago instead of abusing her. It just shoe how evil and conniving he is. He is going to claim he regrets treating her that way. Nit would really being horrible if she ends up with. Some kind of a trauma bonding mess makes me wonder.

So so many mistakes in this book and is making is so annoying to read and am slowly losing interest. It started of strong but chapter after chapter it's the same thing her being abused and crying over and over again and then to make it worse the chapters start going all over the place missing things or they are extremely mixed up and then some chapters are the same , personally don't think I can waste my coins to finish it and the amount of coins needed to open a chapter for it to be either the same thing happening or a while same chapter that I have read. Quite disappointing because I think it would of been a good story otherwise.

The book keeps going in circles and you end up spending more money than is needed. For instance the last 2 chapters I read were from the Mc Alpha and the Ariels pov then e get the same thing in the from only the Alphas pov. How are you able to beat your mate till she is unconscious and not feel anything. What is happening with this material bond. Why did she use a rope and not the wolfsbane, can't she run away. It's frustrating to say the least.

As much as I hate the way Ariel is treated throughout the events of this book, I find it difficult to stop reading. I hope for the best for her, and I certainly hope somehow she can rise above her lowly status and live somewhat of a reasonable life. Damien is a complex character with so much underlying anger that I am not sure he can ever be right. Alex is an interesting character who looks out for Ariel and seems more than interested in her well being.

This book has me torn. The abuse is something hectic, I really don't know why it would be something that needs to be incorporated. I honestly don't see how a person who has endured this much would accept the bond with that kind of monster. I mean she tried to unalive herself at one point, but still hoping for him to change his way and accept the bond as well as her. I honestly don't know how I got this far with what I've read, it's honestly quite triggering.

It is exciting ,heart wrenching, infuriating and more. Very worth your while to read. There were times I cried for Ariel and the abuse and how hard headed Damian was. He was so dang cruel. I loved that at times she stood her ground and stood up for herself. She didn't give up on herself and her love. I do wish Damian came to his senses earlier in the book. I was so angry he blamed her for her parents deeds. I did feel bad for Williams. He just loved the girl he grew up with for a while. He just took it to far. All in all a great book

The story is addicting and the characters of Damien and Ariel are well discribed. But there are many mistakes made in the names which makes reading difficult sometimes….Ariel is sometimes even called Elle or Audrey. Some things written in the story never come back er are never explained. For example: the moon goddess shows up in front of Ariel saying that she must go to her house where she was born to find answers….but that fact never returns in the story. Enemies turn into friends very quickly also…the writer sometimes lost it there for a bit. But I still enjoyed it very much

It's kinda heartbreaking. She has only one person in her corner. I can't count how many times I've come to tears whole reading this story. Only on character 41. I really do hope she gets a break, because no one deserves the torture this poor girl is getting. Damien needs to open his eyes and see that what he is doing to her is wrong and stop. Elle just needs to go away, and all of the head maid should be punched in the throat.

Ok ... Well ... Definitely not a book that i would recommend ... First off ... The story goes aray ... By not only loosing focus on the plots and scenes ... But also the names and who's mated to who ... ... It is like ... Watching a movie it is getting good then the channel changes without you noticing cuz you turned your head and when you turn back n start watching you get completely thrown off cuz not only did the characters change so did the scene making absolutely no sense.

LOVE, LOVE, LOVE. LOVE, LOVE,LIVE, LOVE This book❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤🧡🧡🧡🧡❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤🤍❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ can't wait for more form this author. I can’t get enough had me crying and laughing and crying and laughing and crying and laughing. Did I say that I LOVE this author and the book? Well I do and if I can I'll re read it over and over again. Thank you please don't stop writing. Love love love love the characters and the plot along with the plot twists kept me wanting more