Unpredictable Betrayal : A Sweet of Revenge Reviews

Appears to be a lot of errors in this story. Using incorrect the character names throughout the story. Confusing how they talk in the 3rd person. Not a bad plot to the book but really a hard read with the other things I’ve mentioned. I hope to see less errors in future chapters or I may have to stop reading and move on to another story. Also, it may be a culture thing but some of this stuff would not happen. The MIL is ridiculous.

Definitely like the story so far. The main character is great. She seems to be to be a bit slow to let everyone disrespect her the way she has been so far. Really looking forward to her taking her revenge. Especially on her husbands mother. Because I can’t understand stand why on earth she would let that women do what she is doing to her. But I guess it is apart of the story plot. I can’t wait the read more and see the outcome

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I love e how Aurora is having patience and getting the revenge she deserves.I am halfway through and really hope that she and Aiden end up together. I want to see her happy. I cant waiti to read about how Alex reacts to finding out he is impotent and the regretful way he treat Aurora. the grass sis definitely not always greener and to find out his mother is behind this whole thing, I hope they end up in prison or homeless.

I am personally loving this no Val chap ters so far. Very sweet indications between young and in love unsure of title relevance with Sweet hot heavy young love. Seeing same story across m a n y books but keep coming g back to read more every hour as chap ters un lock. Currently ready 6 or 7 books on here and a few in real life but keeping it exciting enough to keep up with as I circle back

There are so many errors, both grammatically and otherwise I'm this book that it's difficult to read at times. The plot is not only familiar like it was taken from another book but the inconsistencies regarding names, genders, and the like are wow frustrating. The reader has to circle back to make sure the literature wasn't misread. The references in third person when the characters are communicating is quite disturbing as well. However, in an effort to see how it all plays out, the reader's curiosity may make them continue to read the book.

I'm glad 😊 that Aurora and Alden were finally able to become a couple and Family, but the story line seemed to droan on and on and on also had to get used to the different culture of everyone 🤔 talking to each other as a third person then when Aurora had the twins one boy and one girl then next chapter or two called her sons then the last chapter it went back to being her son and daughter again there needs to be proof reading 📚 done big time

I like the story so far and it has a good plot however I can’t stand how out of nowhere the author started writing in a third person and has the characters speak in the third person. Also, there’s some minute details that the author seems to forget that was stated earlier and it contradicts what is being said later in the story. It’s almost like the author needs to go back and reread what they wrote so they don’t mess it up in later chapters.

So far this has been a really good book. 😊 I can’t wait to finish and see what happens. But Nicole seems like she is a real piece of work. 🤦🏼‍♀️ Spoiled and bratty! 😳 👍 haha She reminds me of a girl I use to go to school with. She thought she was all that and a bag of chips! Seems like she needs to be knocked down a couple of notches! 😆 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍

Interesting. I can’t put it down. Some of the chapters are too short in my opinion. Overall it is an easy read. Has you wondering. Definitely do not like seeing Aurora put up with the mistress and mother in law, I hope she gets her revenge on them and also her cheating husband! They surely do need a dose of their own medicine. I hope her and Alden get back together and she can have the family that she deserves.