THE MAFIA'S MISTAKEN BRIDE Reviews
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The first thing that comes to mind is that the name of the novel which attracted the attention of the readers. The author is very intelligent in describing the characters and scenes which makes the reader imagine the whole thing in a very good way. I like the novel and I am very keen to read the rest of the chapters to discover what will happen next. I will also recommend reading this book to my friends and colleagues. Thank you
July 1, 2025K
I’m on the fence with this book. The story line is good. My question is what is the connection between A and J. They aren’t twins, and doppelgängers are rare and end up having the same tattoo? There is a big hole in the story that I hope the author reveals later on, I also hope that at this point in the story that it gets less boring and a little more spicy and the two characters connect more and interact more than they are:..also the male eating disorder? That’s a little strange with how muscular he is… the body needs nourishment. Definitely not from coffee and cake as the story states… I think that is completely unrealistic and unnecessary.
April 30, 2025Jenny Mohr
Very good storyline. There are many grammicatical errors with the wrong word being used, and there are few errors where the wrong character was named. In some places he called her Jasmine and the person he was talking to knew whom he was talking about, so that wasn't believable since she was presumed to be Andre at the time. The fact that the mother knew she had another daughter somewhere and didn't figure out that Jasmine was her daughter was also a little hard to believe. Over all a very good read!!!!
April 24, 2025Faiza
at first it felt boring or qhat but now its great.Giving me a great hope of a nice ending.Andre has found his man i trust and actually the way xavier understood jasmine day by day was cute.Canr wwait for their togeether scenes.Its really a slow burn with pleasure.I like this kinda stories alot.Love for author.Love dor jas.I really want jas to be comfortable with her hair and to discover why she and adre is so alike.Its a mystery for sure.we wanttt more scene.of them bro.
April 22, 2025Black heart
So far i am loving it! There some places where im like wtf but over all i like the writing its keeping my attention and keeping me turning the page. I wish we still had that feature unlock a chapter per hour but me trying to read this with the lease money spent is very difficult. This is a definite must read and i will keep on reading it until i tire of it but so far it hasnt gotten bad.
March 20, 2025Arielle
The mafia’s mistaken bride takes the reader on a journey full of all sorts of emotions. I went from hating Xavier, to feeling sympathy for him, to straight on loving everything about him, same goes for Jasmine AKA Annabelle. Also, the plot twist of her actually being a Moore and getting a second chance at having her parents in her life was brilliant. I wish we could’ve gotten more of her getting to know her twin Andre and them finally getting along. All in all, this was a beautiful book. 9/10
February 11, 2025Leah
This was a nice surprise! I love the building chemistry between Jasmine and Xavier. I am also waiting for their “consummation” and how that will impact Xavier’s feelings. Especially, when Xavier realizes how innocent Jasmine really is in life. I am also curious as to why Jasmine has the same tattoo as Andre. Hopefully, it will be explained by the end of the story. Is it coincidence, or are they connected in some way? It’s definitely worth the read!!
January 21, 2025MJ
I’ve been having a lot of fun discovering new stories and up and coming authors. Of course not every story is perfect but it’s been to try and find stories that I enjoy and want to spend so much time and effort to read. Because I could just go to a store and buy any book and read it all the way through and enjoy that. Or I could go online to numerous website and find stories on those platforms that are completed and I can read all the way through. But instead I’ve decided to use my time wisely by using this app
January 8, 2025Beth
I have read this previously on a different book app, but still enjoyed it once again. Characters seem real or authentic. Places of scenes are well described and seem real. Although the kidnapping of the lead character is realistic, the constant referring to her "twin" is a little much at times and seems unlikely the "twin" would be able to pull off her constant "escape" while the Mafia leader seems a bit immature at the least. But I do recommend this book for anyone's first Mafia read.
December 23, 2024Julianne Wheeler
This novel is sweet and kept me engaged. The plot is good. The characters are complex and their portrayals are realistic and relatable. Would have liked the completed novel to end later in their lives. Would even like to see the lives of the other characters expanded to show their lives and relationships. I really enjoyed this novel and look forward to more from this author. Thank you for sharing your talent with us!
December 7, 2024