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THE MAFIA'S MISTAKEN BRIDE Reviews

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vikki

Review after the novel completion

being born annabell then given to her aunt to raise and how did she end up becoming jasmine?? I’m very confused at that. But the story line was exciting and kept you wanting more. The twin drama was very unexpected as to how Andre ended up not liking annebell and blaming her. Xavier being arrogant and withholding the truth was was written well but the parts involving his mother were very unnecessary. The child born should have had a bigger part in the story.

May 13, 2024
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Dineo Darlene Maditsi Phasha

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The story of how Xavier met and grew to fall in love, it was very interesting and nice to read. I feel that the mafia aspect of Xavier was missing somehow. I mean there was not much info or interaction with his mafia business like some other books I have read about mafia. Any way I found the book very nice, I enjoyed reading every bit of it. I hope to read of your work and also welcome any recommendations you might have

April 27, 2024
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Driyah Johnson

Review after half of the novel

This story is truly different from many that I’ve read on here but so intriguing at the same time. The relationship dynamic is some thing out of this world. I hate that she’s going through this and being taken advantage of but the real person is a coward. I understand you’re going through something but come on now you could’ve at least said your peace and left it as is instead of making another woman fights in your place, I truly love this story and I can’t wait to continue reading if you haven’t started reading it already you need to. It’s amazing. Thank you for this! Yes

April 20, 2024
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KB

Review after the novel completion

Very nice novel! Quite an original plot. This is pure pleasure to read. There is no boredom here, the threads are not overly stretched, and the tension built is perfect, not too much, not too little. I like the extensive presentation of what Xavier feels, his feelings, fears, internal conflicts, it shows not to judge anyone superficially. I'm missing the last chapter, which would describe the further story, their children, will Alex and Andre also get married? What about grandma? And one minus - I don't know exactly where the sisters' tattoos come from, who did them and why??? So the author needs a bonus chapter or a few 😄

April 20, 2024
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Johanna Davids

Review after the novel completion

I would have love a page about the wedding night but I enjoyed this book very much Jasmine is a kind loving and forgiving person she was just the right women to soften Xavier's heart and change his outlook on life and embrace his siblings after all they were also innocent was not their fault for their father's infedility and Mrs Moore I still think she could have stand up for Jasmine the moment she realised she was her other daughter but she chose to protect Andre instead but in the end she asked for forgiveness and make amends and that's all that matters thank you for this intriguing book I loved it 💖

April 17, 2024
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Jess Fairfield

Review after half of the novel

Great so far chapters could be longer ads could give more coins or even not be so much to be unlocked can’t wait to see what else is going to happen in this I hope y’all update so u can receive more coins would be better if u could just read the whole book for a low cost if u buy the coins it’s going to be bout 100 a book witch is not worth it at all that’s all

April 13, 2024
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marios

Review after the novel completion

Amazing story line keeps you wanting to know the other chapter the only thing i would say is the writer or the app should make the unlock page cost all the same not some more others less appart from that everything the story the characters the drama the emotion everything was amazing. Amazing story line keeps you wanting to know the other chapter the only thing i would say is the writer or the app should make the unlock page cost all the same not some more others less appart from that everything the story the characters the drama the emotion everything was amazing.

April 9, 2024
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Tammy Rose

Review after half of the novel

I like the story so far. There are some gaps in some parts of the story line that arent explained or leave you to question what is happening and how it got to where it's at. The characters all seem pretty good as far as the author being able to paint a clear picture so the reader can visualize what they look like along with their personalities. The plot is good and different from the normal mafia stories. I'm anxious to see where the story goes.

April 9, 2024
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Hannah Martel

Review after half of the novel

Amazing! I love this story so much! The characters are so great. I love Jasmine is so wonderful. The plot is really good. I think that Andre could be a little more heartless to show the difference between them but it was great. I loved Xavier. He seems to be very attractive to be honest.... the dream man for anyone. Haha Thank you for writing this story is a great read. I look forward to reading your other works!

April 6, 2024
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Nori Chase

Review after half of the novel

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April 2, 2024