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Misty Snyder

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I cannot tell you how invested I got in reading this story. I am so disappointed in the ending of this book. I sure hope there is a book too because if not, I am going to be very upset. How is it all gonna end for Aslan? Will Ellane really get away? It was really misleading, but so interesting throughout the entire thing wondering who is really in love and who wasn’t between these two. I thought that it was truly gonna end in this beautiful wedding with their undying love for each other but then again there was a shocking twist, but I can’t say that I’m disappointed with the way it did end as far as the dramatics went. I am however, disappointed in the huge cliffhanger at the end.

June 24, 2024
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Chantel Smith

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Very dissapointed.. .... why? very hooked until the ending ended the way it did. Now I just don't even want to go to a second booked just to be dissapointed again. Mix signals from her aswell as then when it suites her she play the victim. .. .... love to support the writer but give the readers more so that they will know there will be a second book or a lead in the story about a second book.... ...

April 11, 2024
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J Mon

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The story line had some good points, but it was very disjointed. The last page had the title misspelled. The entire novel could use a good edit. That being said it was engaging enough of a novel for me to wonder how the author was going to end it. I did spend coins on the 2nd half of the book. No spoilers, but I wish I hadn't. I really disliked how the author ended the book. I don't plan on looking for more by this author.

March 20, 2024
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Joanna Alatto

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I liked the book with Aslan and Elena but I didn’t like that they didn’t give me a definite ending. It says that the book is complete, but it isn’t because it says to be continued. I wished for a happy ending, and Aslan changed for her. But she still couldn’t trust him and he still didn’t show his true self to her so she didn’t believe that he changed for her. I still can’t believe the ending. I hope that the other book will be out soon.

March 13, 2024
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Saneeshma Saju2nd

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I don't understand it..... Is she dead? Is the novel over. What the fuck the last fee chapters were soo small and i must say I like the climax but please inofrm more details like u did in first chapters. The end few chapters were done within few minutes. I can't believe this if this is the end it doesn't hold any meaning. Like what is the moral of the story. He loved her wanted to marry her she had feeling but he disrespected her. Where does she makes him realise where was he telling her his true self.

March 9, 2024
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Jasmina šoštarič

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Great book, but some things needed explanation. Maybe she should tell him about her paretns. He should tell her about his father. He should applogize for bad behaviour through all chapters. And how can somehow be someones puppet. the caracter is sick to the bones in some ways. He shoul give her freedom and not have her like a prisoner. She is still human just like him. He loves her, but doin everything like he doesnt care about her at all.

March 6, 2024
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M

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I don not know what to think of this story. It has it good parts, but also some parts that do not make sense. And I hated that there was no real ending, while it said it was a completed story. They both have some strange personality traids. And how come she goes from having two jobs, to not showing up al of a sudden. It was never mentioned how this was handeld. And her parents and sister are some horrible People for reacting that way!

February 26, 2024
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Natalie Savvy

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Whoa what!! How and when did Elena plan all of this, I get why she is angry and feels betrayed. Aslan hasn't been great with letting his genuine feeling show for her. And the branding was a bit to much! But who did she work with to have him shot? Was in Derek?? I'm suspicious that she joined hands with him... Oh no I would hope he finished the job or else they will have a deadly alsan to deal with Elena ruuuun!!

February 15, 2024
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Ava

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The novel started out really good. I like the way the novel went. From Elena being with her jerk of a husband and then to being with Aslan. Also Aslan is a nice character, how he was trying to protect Elena, trying to take care of her and give her whatever she wanted. There were also times that he hurt her feelings but deep down he cared. I'm really curious to know what happened between Aslan and his father because the hatred is really felt. I really cannot wait for part 2. I really need to know what happened, why she left him on their wedding day 😫

January 30, 2024
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Samantha Onwuka

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April 24, 2025
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