The Hockey Star Regret
- Genre: Romance
- Author: Author Aya Starr
- Chapters: 149
- Status: Ongoing
- Age Rating: 18+
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- ⭐ 9.7
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Coleen Maine hated Hayden Michaels with her entire heart. After high school graduation, she thought she had escaped the hell that being a classmate to Hayden was. Being his academic rival was enough to put her, Coleen, at the top of his sh*t list. To make matters worse, he’s the hot, popular jock with a full-ride scholarship he doesn’t need, because he has all the money that she doesn’t. When Coleen finds herself in close contact with Hayden again out of no free will of her own, she expects things to be the same. But somehow, somewhere between summer and starting their first year at college, something changed. Now, Coleen isn’t sure Hayden hates her anymore. Between her new job, college, and her friendships, she finds herself wondering what lies behind Hayden’s deep gaze towards her.
Laura Jernigan
There are two issues I have with the story. I think it needs a proof reader. Words are missing, English is not always correct, but nothing to huge there. The other is a lack in hockey knowledge. The Stanley Cup is the NHL trophy. There are three collage trophies that depend on which division the school is in. Just constructive feedback. Please keep writing. This has a slow progression, but flows pretty well. I still like it better than some popular published books!
January 11, 2026

