The Alpha King And The Hunt

This had A LOT of spelling errors, words missed out or joined to other words. There's several names that have been used and exactly the same names were in a previous book. Not common names. Also, where in the world is the name Louis, feminine? It's a male name, the female version is either Louise or Louisa. I thought you'd made an error for one chapter when she first appeared but then it continued and my my name is one of the above so I kept calling her by my name. How is it that Caelum was eating from a bottle one chapter and the next running with Kaelen? Where is the consistency? I thought it was a really bad idea to go off the narrative the first time with Louis and Damien but at least you told everyone that you were doing it. Updates on them would have been preferable to me. The same with the second time you almost wrote Kaelen out of the book. I think it should have been updates again not taking the entirety of the last 3rd or quarter of the book. Even visiting Aria is about them. Why does the moon goddess change? And Aria's wolf is white, then Ash then white again, while she still has magic. Because according to other books a pure white wolf is one with power not powerless like you claim and her wolf is Selene, but isn't that supposed to be the moon goddesses name? I don't recommend this book to anyone.