Uncle's obsession
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“Please don’t do this, I don’t want to marry you,” pleaded the girl, “You don’t have a choice but to obey me, my flower,” announced Sebastian. “But you are......... Sebastian D’Angelo, a billionaire who’s obsessed with petal, His friend’s daughter. He became a sicko chasing after a forbidden desire and swore to protect her when no one else can. A selfish man hellbent on ruining everyone’s lives over a teenage girl. Protecting her from the evil eyes, he didn’t realize when lines blurred—and the blurrier the line, the easier it is to cross. Now nothing can stop him from keeping his Petal safe by his side forever.

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The sentences need to be reviewed because it really is hard to follow but you can follow just enough to know whats going on and of course it ended with a cliffhanger but has a lot of potential. I really do think if there were a few people who proofread this it could really come together quite well the characters could definitely use some more background like where they grew up and some details like what they look like its hard to out down still even though its lacking those things.
November 27, 2023