Alpha's Betted Bride Reviews

Loving the story so far. I wished she Gabby could have been saved before she had to endure the torture she went through with Asher but im really looking forward to seeing how Aiden is going to fix his mistakes. Hopefully he will be able to show her love and make her feel whole again. The poor girl deserves a break! Love her brothers and how protective they are of her too! I’d also love to see Aiden get rid of her horrid parents!

Its wonderful! So many secrets then one you thats it bam something else definitely worth the coin money 😍 i highly recommend it. So far my favorite character is gabby. Been through so much yet shes so strong. You couldnt ask for a better book. Its got so many highs and cliff hanger and a book like this has never made me cry so much. I absolutely love being on the edge of my seat. If you love stuff like that then its worth the read. 😊😍

Love this novel! It’s amazing, I love the chemistry between Gabby and Aiden, the unexpected plot twists. I’m happy Cassey hasn’t turned out to be like Sam. I’m glad Cole got what he deserves, I feel so sorry for Cassey but that Aiden finally came to his senses! I hope Gabby’s parents get what they deserve and Gabby gets the justice she deserves. I can’t wait to see where these two love birds go!

Fredrick was in the pup in my job doesn't matter to me too much to get it has been running since about the day of school but I don't know what to do but its just the pup and is not for Mia and her daughter is going back to know me and I don't want to go back and I don't want you in the pup and I'm sorry you are a little better and is still running around and is still running around and is still running around and is still running around to the store for the rest of the week I have to get the end of the day so we can only do light on it or do when we get my own house we will get a new one in Baltimore in a couple weeks lol I was born and I was born in a little.yhdgjuu and the one that he is my mom I don't know it is the best thing I can say and you don't want to talk with him anymore I don't want him to get hurt but I don't know what he has done for me and is not going out of twin turbo or the car or the truck or something and I'll let her know it has been running since about and now its been a while but its been a long day but its been so hard for me to work with him but she was born in the middle of the pup and the one in your face I don't like that shit but I'm a good girl but u can get me some food lol I'm going home to get a job so I'm gonna be home soon as i see him again alot

Well first:... there were a lot of spelling errors that could have been fixed with a simple run thru spell check. It's lazy for the authors not to take the time to utilize something so simple as spell check. 80% of her spelling errors were letters in the wrong places. An example she spelled "beautiful" as: "beuatiful". And "as" she spelt "sa". See simple things but very irritating to a reader when words like that were popping up everywhere there for a while. Secondly: IMPO, If a woman is viciously raped...she isn't gonna want to have rough sex the first time she has sex after the fact. That's messed up. Third: the story line. It started out, in thr first 3-4 chapters as the same Ole type of story I've read many times, But it changed. It got better, it got stronger, it got unique. The story line improved and (I could even over look the simple spelling errors.) The author had a clever way of pulling you in. It held such promise!!! If she had just done simple things to help the writing out it would have been an exceptional read!!! I do ask over all if the writers do run each chapter thru spell check before submitting them. It should be a pre-requisite. On occational spelling error is one thing but over and over? It really does ruin the story as you begin focusing on that instead of the story itself. And some stories in this site are fantastic and to have the focus on trivial things instead of the actual story line...well it's a shame. Keep up the great story lines Mrs. M!

This book has a good story line but some times it’s hard to get past the spelling and grammatical errors. The characters are well rounded and the antagonists are easy to hate. There are instances in the book that the story line lacks depth and you’re left with questions about how the story will eventually play out. I’m intrigued so far in what is happening in the story but the lack of description for not just the characters but the story line itself is frustrating.

So far I am enjoying the book. The characters are thought out. The bad guys in this made me wanna reach through my screen. I definitely could of used a trigger warning on one of the chapters. I am very curious to see where this all goes. How the characters are going to develop as the story continues. Also Aiden's mom is a damn rock star. Like everyone needs a mom or mother in law like her. The strong caring and nonsense personality.

I love how well put together this story is & especially how the drama is front and center before any real happy ending can happen . The story line is perfect you never really read about the hardships people are really going through before they get the happy ending. Love love this and can not wait to finish it I just hope Gabby comes out of this slump . And big ol question here being that Casey was raped how can she not find the right things or words to say to her best friend ? May have been years ago but that feeling never fades .

Such a good book, I didn’t think Aiden would turn out to be such a good guy for her and thought he was so cold in the beginning, so I was very pleased when things started to turn around. I loved that Sam finally got what she deserved since I didn’t think that part would come and how she was so addicted to Aiden. It was really good from start to finish, I wish there was a second book

Great book so far, got me hooked on it, can't wait to keep reading more of it. Hbhh bbb fcfg ghjn cdz. Byg jn bugfvbhuijb bgfv jjgg jhgg hhukn ddrgb bhh. Ffddy gujvf vgffyb ghjhfc ghgjnbf ddrtbnmk gttfdh ggh gfd d g h h h h h g f t f t y h h