Age Is Just a Number
- Genre: Romance
- Author: Jeffery zedd
- Chapters: 122
- Status: Completed
- Age Rating: 18+
- 👁 8.3K
- ⭐ 1.0
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Annotation
"You're right; I can't be a kid following a guy who will never notice me forever." Zara Lee, a young smart girl, has always been in love with the Italian boy next door since he moved to America. Everything about his handsome figure set her soul on fire. But to her, the only problem is their eight year age gap. But little does she know, that isn't the only problem keeping them from being together.
Pips
I'm general, it is an enjoyable story. The Grammer is not great, and the formatting is not either. The overuse of certain words, and poor descriptions prompt me to offer to purchase a dictionary and thesaurus. The plot is a fun idea, though, it seems to be slightly inconsistent. The characters while being presented at different ages, do not have any measurable growth in character. Overall this story started out as a good idea that could have been an amazing story had it been more thoroughly fleshed out, rather than whatever the author did to make it resemble an early fiction writing assignment.
May 7, 2024

