The Vampire's Pleasure Slave Reviews

I L O V E it is sooooo G O O D you some do more like thing. I like how she doesn’t wanna go back home cause she likes him I haven’t read it all but I really hope they get together and I hope he doesn’t call her pet or human and calls her by her name and he doesn’t make her call him master and let’s her call him by his name. Who ever wrote this did a great job so far what I have read!!

F*ck she was a definite whore by the end of this. That was so good and so naughty. Definitely one of my favourite books. Well written though I will say there were some minor typos. It got past them. By Gods I wish I could find a "master " that would help me out sometimes like this. Lol. Such a naughty slave, but very good book thank you for writing this book.

It's a fun kinda easy read. I like how it's picking up now with some unexpected twists in the story, I'm looking forward to see how the conflicts that are coming up in the story end up panning out and resolving themselves. I'm also hoping this turns into a kind of enimies to lovers story. if you like erotica then you will probably like this story.. It has a bdsm theme and sexual content so be aware. I wish the chapters were longer though.

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So far so good. Definitely a dark book. It is written pretty well although I don't quite understand where the author is going with the story as of yet. The lead female is not really someone you would think of as a good person. She is selfish and a bit nasty in temperament. The lead male is a vampire but there does not seem to be much back story on him yet and he is not really a well rounded caricature as of yet. But all in all it's an ok read.

I think that the relationship between star and her master is decent. I think there needs to be alot more going on.. does he love her, like her, hate her, only think of her as a pet. It is very well written and there are plenty of steamy scenes. I would love to see him actually fall for her. Or atleast see a point of view through his eyes expressing his feelings. Other than that you are an amazing artist.

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Many unclear moment and story lines! Nothing is explained but hopefully it will all come clear in the end! Not my type of story but I’m hooked to keep going! I don’t pay or buy any coins! I just watch Ad and check in daily! A few mins reading a day is more than enough! Very much unusual type of Vampires world! A lot of heat and fire created reading this for sure! Very much erotic and less story lines!

I am enjoying the book. Some grammar issues are causing some trip ups in the story but the plot is keeping me interested. My guess is the author’s 1st language is not English but an editor or proofreader would make all the difference. But as I said, the book is still good so far so I am interested in where we go from here with the storyline. At the beginning of the book, the 1st few chapters seemed rushed, I feel like we missed key details about the main characters storyline to explain who she is. And details from the vampire side. But as the story progresses we get details about the vampire side.

Not really sure where this is going..feel like the story is a little amateur for my liking but am hoping it gets better as time goes on. I feel like we have not gotten much of the story so far and a lot of things could have been explained better up to this point but it’s really just a bunch of sex scenes. I also feel like Star went from being larger than life to just a mindless slave but hoping that changes.