The Alpha's Forbidden Mate Reviews

Loved this novel, one of the best I've read so far not too long that you get bored waiting for the epilogue. Plenty of action besides the ongoing love story, the twists and turns kept you interested but, it wasn't dragged out like so many other stories I've read, some of which I haven't bothered to finish as the repetitiveness has put me off. Full marks for keeping my level of attention making it so very enjoyable, hope to find another story by this author.

Okay, so, umm, yeah this is a twist. Ok so my first thought is ok why didn't the alpha go after the two once he felt them leave the pack especially since they went south the same direction of the vampire who attacked the pups came from. My first thought is that they r going to try n get in with them. Second who woulda think that her old pack would come into play before the other two did. And now what's gonna happen and hopefully after this these two end up mating before long

I love the story line so much far , not quite done reading the novel but I enjoy it so far ! I love that you can feel the characters, the scenery. You can feel the characters emotions as well , it’s like you are in the story with them , standing side by side listening as if in the first person perspective. The details are great , the dialogue as well . I enjoy the story . It leaves you wanting more waiting for the chapters

I love all the angles in the story and I'm glad that Cyra was put into her place. She definitely is not all there. I love that there is a female alpha even though she has hid it from her mate and the pack. I'm hoping that everyone gets their just dues in time so there will be a happy ending. These stories are my favorite ones to read and this one is really good. Thank you for writing it

This storyline really keeps me on my toes, so much is happening, the characters are very good discribed and the chapters are very well written, I love the fact that there is a strong female alpha plus the chapters are quit long, so I am very pleased with this one. I am totally addicted to every new chapter and how everything is developing. I can’t wait until Cyra, her evil dad and even more evil alpha Lomon all get their karma!

This is really good. I really like the storyline and how things develop. I also like the unique way the packs are set up and the whole setting of the main pack. Also love how badass she is and how she thinks of others. Not weak but still caring and wanting to protect. I love her friendship with Zenobia as well. That is one of the best parts. As I continue to read, I hope we learn more about her past.

Omg I love this book.. recommend it to anyone. I love how she is portrayed as a strong independent woman that doesn't take no crap. That she will protect others and take the beating and whatever is thrown their ways. I also love how he is strong and is able to overcome living on an island when the entire pack is taken down by vampires. Poor little boy he was then to be a victim. But he works with it and makes his new pack strong and ready to fight anything that comes their ways.

This book has a great story line to it because I’ve notice that a lot of the chapters repeat themselves or sometimes I’ll have to read the chapter over again because I had trouble reading it the first time. The book chapters are not that long but at least the book is cheap coins to unlock chapters there is slit of spelling mistakes but so is most of the books on this app but I do like the story

Pretty good. Sometimes the language shifts and it almost seems like it was written by someone who doesn't speak English very well. And some of the paragraphs repeat, which makes it difficult to read. But other than that, the story line is pretty decent and keeps you hooked. So if you can skip over the pieces that repeat or do not make sense, it is a pretty decent read. Also, it is about dang time they get together and what's her face is out of the picture.

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