The Vampire’s kiss Reviews

This was a great story line. The depth of the characters was also fairly impressive. All in all, this was a good read. That is all I want to write. Thank you, thank you, thank you. Goodbye, goodbye, goodbye. I'm over it, over it, over it, over it, over it, over it, over it, over it, over it, over it, over it,

Mediocre. Interesting story line but very poor flow. What was Avril's motive and what deal did she make with Blood? What about Killian? Did he change his mind? Very little information about Xander's parent. Who was the mysterious person that met them at the hospital? What kind of sacrifice did Lexi make? How was the final battle? How did Lily help in it? How did Lily even heal Matt? A whole lot of unanswered questions making the story feel rushed

I actually have not read super far into ' The Vampire's Kiss ' yet, but so far I love it! Two words I would use to describe it, are : 'Intriguing' and, at times, 'Intense. ' I actually have not read super far into ' The Vampire's Kiss ' yet, but so far I love it! Two words I would use to describe it, are : 'Intriguing' and, at times, 'Intense. '

The novel is interesting,but it could have been good if the writer go further, we don't even know how he saved Alex and Jennifer and how he got rid of the vipers and it doesn't make sense that avil is the one that give him determination to face what's ahead, I would be good if we know hw they all overcome the war, If you have ended the story where they got married and had kid it have been better,although I like the novel 😉💙 keep it up dude

This feels like it was written by a teenage girl, for teenage girls. The writing is very amateurish, with several errors and wrong tenses used (especially in dialogue; everyone uses past tense when speaking of events currently happening, it’s very jarring). The characters think and act like children; they are overly emotional (Alex cries CONSTANTLY, which tbf is understandable considering her circumstances, but it’s still tiring to read all the time), and the two main characters are incapable of rational thought or decision making. Seriously, what kind of idiot throws away notes from her stalker and EATS muffins left by said stalker, instead of keeping them as valuable evidence??? The novel feels very self-indulgent and like wish fulfilment for a young novice author. The protagonist gets a high-paying job she enjoys, only a couple of years after graduating, everyone compliments her on her amazing beauty, men fight for her and are obsessively in love with her, despite her complete lack of personality, and the police go WAY above and beyond the call of duty to help her, despite her only evidence being mysterious hickeys. One thing I do really like is that Alex does not easily forgive her stalker, and rightfully rakes him over the coals for his actions. He has to actually make amends for what he did, and that kind of accountability is refreshing. The stalker’s reasons for ‘playing with’ Alex, instead of just talking to her, are so dumb, though. Despite my criticisms, this does have a certain charm to it, and I’m sure young girls (which probably make up most of this app’s reader base) will probably enjoy it. Just skip the last 10ish chapters, they just bog down and muddy a perfectly good happy ending.

This was a really good story. But it never explained why Xander was tormenting Alexandra. Kept switching up names and confusing the characters. Other than that it has a good concept. The end came to fast with no explanation abouXanderst what had happened for the so called great battle. It didn't explain what was supposed to have happened with Killian. Or why and how he had been connected to Xanders father. Lot of missing little details that would be great to know

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It was interesting and I always wanted to read more to see what happened next. I liked it because it was different to some of the books I have read. I also liked that it did not have to be updated and I could finish the book. It's would have been great if their was a sequel to this book. Xander was a funny character and made me laugh. I would have liked to see all of the main characters have a happy ending but oh well🙂

I loved the book. The only issue that I found was when the incorrect name and words were used in the book. It was distracting when I had to reread those portions and mentally correct what I was reading. However, overall I enjoyed the book immensely. Only portion that I felt disturbed with was when Xander was stalking Alex. In the beginning it was triggering due to him being a psychopathic individual. Grammerly would have been helpful to make the book amazing along with fewer episodes of the stalking.

Great story.Loved it.Actually u should have add more about the battle please.Bcz ut felt like it all ended all of a sudden.Wtf happened to avail.Blood or killan. Nothing is clear here.We wanted to read bout the battle cz its important.U cant just cut it out.Other than that everytuing was so nice. Everyone was great with their or act and backgrounds.Xander and Lexi are forever together .I loved max and aaron.Aaron took over leci dna and max took xanders.Nice one.We wanted more episodes and detailing.Why did u change laila s name in the end bro.Not nice.