The Billionaire's Unwanted Wife Reviews

Overall AlphaNovel is a good site. The stories although some are similar they are a good read. I wish there were more mafia and billionaire stories as there is wolf stories. I have really enjoyed the billionaire and mafia stories that I have read so far. Although there are some stories that seem to run on and on they have still been entertaining. I also like that there are new stories that are made available consistently. There a good variety of audio novels which gives the opportunity to listen to more than one story each day if you choose.

This wasn't bad but it wasn't great. There are a few types, but nothing that can't be forgiven. The story line could use some work and there are more than a couple of tangent stories that really do nothing to aid in the story line. I found it better to listen to than read. And now because there is a minimum word requirement to post a review.... A a a a a a a a a a a a a

Well the story was good, but there were so many chapters that were not coherent. Some things did not make sense, but all was okay. I hope you can write something else with a little more coherent details. Also I wish if there were like different voices for each character that would have been great. The kids are sweet but sounded a little more mature that there age I don't think that can say many things that were said in the story. Good luck for the next story.

Very slow the narration of this story and if I might add it's also very weird. I must admit that it's somehow refreshing to be on edge with some suspense even if the characters seem stupid and not realistic in some scenes and in some it mirrors true life, If it were real life I'd say very cruel. No respect whatsoever, no trust, no boundaries. Scary to see that not only a sister but a twin could be so cruel nasty and hateful.

I like the storyline. Twists and turns, friendship, betrayal, loyalty, love, heartbreak... It was difficult to read, I am guessing it is not authors first language. Also some random names here and there totally trows you out of the loop. For me, ending is a big no. Lyra deserves someone else who would cherish and love her unconditionally and not Bruce who already destroyed her. How could she trust him again? Love him? All for kids? No way. Bruce is not worth it. He missed his chance.

Bruce is such a loser.Losing such a wife.Luckly Laura had tia unlike other women she was able to rise her twins.I hope she heals and finds happiness.Her sister is so evil and I wonder what type of parents and in laws felt.I am happy that Tia stayed with her.I wish her happiness as her family.She is strong , powerful and kind hearted.Tia is more of a sister to Laura then Ella will ever.I wonder if Bruce will ever find out how much of fool he is.

Love love love this novel it's so damn good I feel sorry for Lyra I hope her ex husband gets everything coming to him I can't stand her twin sister she need to go jump off a clifff or something I don't really like her maid Tia either she let's every one walk over her Lyra husband is the worst I hope he loose everything this is a very good book that keeps you on your toes I can't wait to finish it

Good book after chapter 15 it’s captivating now from my previous thoughts I like that the characters are becoming stronger now I don’t like that she has been hurt so much and by the people who should love her unconditionally but each turn makes her stronger this book is g g g g g g g g o o o o d d d d d n n n n o o o w w w w w

I love that they have so many different things going on. I hate when it just the two main characters it’s annoying no one else supposed to be love when a book is written. Also, I feel if they do many things makes me more interested in a book. These two main characters had so much going for them but when they added the other two live birds. I couldn’t stop reading it. Just great reading so far.

Read this one twice because I liked it. I like all the twists and turns but some of them are such one eightys that it can be confusing and too easy. Bruce changed about 4 times through the whole story. Ella stayed consistent and so did henri and tia. But Lyra the main character was also a big changer and for being so smart really kinda dumb. There were a few scenarios that seemed to have been added for excitement but we're completely off base with the previous information given. You can't make Tia a millionaire who then has no money or a car to do her own shopping. Also I was a little confused as to where this ended up taking place was it Australia France or Asia. This didn't stop me from liking the story but it definitely made reading it sometimes confusing.