The Billionaire’s Secret Heirs Reviews

I enjoyed it. Three pages does not constitute a chapter. I thought it was the kind of reading most would be drawn into. I can appreciate the sex but I have a good imagination I don’t need a blow by blow literally. You could have been less graffic than you were, That’s just me. I would have set Celine up in art classes before ending it again that’s me. I really did enjoy it and thank you for writing it! Take care have a day.

I feel like this was a good novel. However, the beginning dragged for half the book like edging the readers to something then taking it away. The story started to get more interesting towards the end and more involved. But, now it’s ended on a cliff hanger like more is to come but it’s saying it’s over. I’m disappointed if it is over because then that just leaves a unsatisfied ending. I hope the author pulls together at least another 20 chapters to try to wrap this up.

Event though the book moves on a snail pace it really is a good story line. The author is doing a good job articulating the love story of two people from different walks now life and completely different statuses.i honestly wished that each chapter was a bit more action filled and not just focusing on how main female character are being humiliated and belitted. I wish he can remember that night already and start laying claim on the woman he loves and his son.

I have been reading this story and do like the story line but there is so much repetition between both parties as if it’s one way to lengthen the story. Things that are supposedly going to be said the following day don’t get said. The nasty threats from the solicitor and the mean mother also don’t get brought out into the open and disrespectful staff that seem like they can voice their vicious opinions without repercussions is also frustrating.

I am so happy to be able to read this book and enjoy waiting to see what it is going to happen in this book and if they’re going to be together in the future and how long it will take for him to realize that he is the father of little boy and that is the reason why he is interested in little boy and what is the reason that he wants to see what is happening with little boy and his mother

Too many unanswered questions, too many secrets. Where will all this end. Celine needs to stand up for her rights and keave the place and find herself another employer. As usual , Hunter shluld do a DNA test and once an̈d flr all take on the responsibility that is standing on his face. A childnis always innocent, and they shluld not have to pay for tĥeir parents sin. Celine needs to leave and finds herself a better emplyer that will treat her right.

I am confused by Caroline's behavior as Celines friend who introduced her to the job, but still syabs her in the back every now and again. Hunter needs to get off his high horse, before je misses this train of love, because tell me why he is so jealous of Cole and Celine when he doesn't want to confess his feelings. Celine must get a daycare for her son it's very unprofessional this thing of making mistakes at crucial moments

In the beginning it was quite catchy but after a while it gets more of the same. The main characters keep saying and thing the same thing over and over.the girl, celine, is becoming more and more subjective and losses al spirit. I ‘m a bit disappointed because in the beginning it was interesting to read. But now i wonder if the writer just wants to get more ‘money’ by dragging it on and on. And it is not consistant anymore.one moment she sleeps 2 doors away and then the lives in the quaters outside the main house, or she was in the study of hunter and then one night she’s never been in there before I bought some coins so i kept reading till they are finished (i’m sort of done with this app to, because it is the 2bd ‘book’ i read and they are all the same. After a while the writers loses track of the story )

Good story. I don't know how Celine can work under Hunter's roof. He's such an aloof jerk. I don't recall Celine's background, but she's doing the best she can in a world not her own. Hunter is going to have to break for this relationship to progress. I get tired of the pettiness and back stabbing it's kind of a common story line. This is starting to drag out a bit, but the interest still lingers. Ok I reached the end, I think. The author needs to go back and read this herself. Wat to many inconsistencies, repeated descriptions easy to skip over, and the ending? Totally anticlimactic. Go fix it!!!! This could be a great story but needs work and a happily ever after ending.

Good reading thus far, what this must be for the stone age. Why can single work in a respectful hotel? To go so far as to have her fired, then to fire the manager that hired her was ridiculous. Then your cousin her bestie get her an interview to be a maid. What crazy is you believe thats your son but to afraid to have a DNA test. Hunter too scared to admit that he wants to pursue something with Celine