Married To Her Sister's Grumpy Fiancé Reviews

Such a beautiful story 😍 I am so glad that he insisted on the marriage contract when he was still a teenager because truly it could have been a different story she might just have ended up with someone else due to memory lost, I actually felt sorry for her boss but I would choose her husband again and again its however very unfortunate that her mother decided to forgive the father and get back together with him just forgiveness would have been enough

This is such a great book. The plot is intriguing and keeps you coming back. The characters are definitely unique and in a way I wish there was a deeper aspect explored of the FMC and MMC. The grammar/ sentences structures could be a bit better as you can sometimes be Interrupted trying to understand what's being said. However it does not pose too much of a hindrance. I look forward to see what else could be in store for the MCs

I am begging the author, on my hands and knees, to please find an editor, because this novel desperately needs to be proofread and cleaned up. The writing really is THAT bad. Which is unfortunate, because it seriously drags down what would otherwise be a very entertaining story. I appreciate how tight and focused the plot is; there are no tediously long side plots bogging it down or slowing the pacing, everything progresses smoothly. The characters are hit and miss. On the whole, the protagonists are likeable enough, though their characterisation is tied way too heavily to the plot. Charlotte suffers from this the worst. Her character changes depending on what the plot requires - she’s kind when the plot needs her to be, but otherwise quite rude and uncaring (she never says ‘please’ or ‘thank you’, never tries to befriend the people around her etc.), she’s generally pretty smart and sensible (which is very refreshing!), but makes unbelievably stupid decisions, for quite literally no reason whatsoever, whenever the plot needs her to. Dalton is very much the same, especially when it comes to suddenly being a complete moron whenever the plot requires it. I hate these kinds of plot contrivances, and it does the novel a huge disservice for the story to only exist because otherwise smart characters do or don’t do things for no reason at all. But apart from the absolutely abysmal state of the writing and the characters randomly losing all their brain cells from time to time, I did really enjoy reading this and would recommend it, so long as you can tolerate these flaws.

Great story. Although the ending was somehow abrupt and it felt like the last chapter was written in a hurry. So it was like there was every thought, every dialogue described and suddenly the style changed to "two months have passed and everything was great then another five months passed and it was even better and then there was a child because somewhere on the road they probably started to have sex." Also there was a whole chapter about Bethany and some Charles and then just nothing. Why? At least give us some info when you started it 🤣

I loved the book. The way it went from an arranged marriage to a loving one. It was so easy to fall for Dalton with his wheelchair and the way Charlotte didn't give up on him. The things she had to go through to make everything work out for her and her mother. How Dalton backed her up and did not make her feel like she wasn't good enough to be his wife. I will read this book again and suggest it to anyone else!

This novel was a very good read It was not so long and drawn out and the villains got exactly what they deserved and Charlotte g9t to have a good life. I just really can't understand how a grandmother could hate her grandchild...Charlotte was just doing what kids do and wanted her beloved grandfather to take her to play.Its not like she planned the accident or wanted her grandfather dead.He did wat any parent or grandparents would do and that's protect the child.....

I have been reading this book three last few days and found that I really enjoyed it. I do wish it was audio so I couldlisten to it when I'm busy with other things. Other than that the book has been holding my attention pretty good. I like that she is not a crybaby. She actually stands up for herself. I rare to find an actual strong female lead and not a fake wanna be. It's a breath of fresh air.

Such a cute love story. The drama was very good and the plot was great. Bacon was very good as well. I loved the banter between Dalton and Emily. And it’s just so adorable they knew each other as children and BAM they were married! Also love that it was not crazy long and drawn out. Just right to the point and good stuff. I hope you write more things o enjoyed every page and second of reading the story

I am really enjoying this book.. I love the two main characters especially...Even Daltons family is cool... Her father is a really a piece of work... Some men are just the pits... She needs to disown her father and maternal grandmother because they know the truth and are disgusting people for how they treated their daughter-in-law and granddaughter, they are just greedy money hungry evil people.. As for the stepmother and stepsister, it is so typical of those two characters to be evil, I can't wait for them both to be exposed for who they really are... Love it so far.

So far i love the storyline and i think Charlotte is a beautiful, strong young woman. I would love to see more of the husband Daltons POV to see his side of the story but so far i suppose the lack of his side POV is keeping the suspense going. She maybe needed a friend as well as she only has her mother as an ally and she cant really be open with her mom about certain things as she could b with a friend. Also the editing and grammar could be improved but all in all i am still enjoying the story so far.