Entangled with the mafia boss Reviews

Overall very good and interesting written novel, sometimes it does confuse me and makes me question whether I am reading the right story or not, as it seems to have names and characters confused. In the beginning some characters were called different names and now something else so that just did not make sense. Good job author for writing a creative novel, I would only suggest maybe proofreading and making sure all is correct before submitting next novels to readers

I absolutely loved the book, I would reread it again. The only thing that i didnt like about the book was a few of the chapters where repeat chapters from the beginning of the book and i had to skip them so i could finish where it had left off. They also didn’t tell us that they were going to repeat the chapters what so ever… but other than that it was a very good written book that i definitely enjoyed.

I really do like the book. I just don’t like how chapters repeat its self. It’s a great read , awesome plot twist , but I felt like it needed more substance. I brought coins to finish the book just to think I was rereading the same chapters. I Stan for Lorenzo and Audrey relationship , I hope there is a part 2 be a I want to know how the pregnancy is gonna go.. I also wanna know how she gonna adapt to being a mom and married. Som many things left unsaid

I say this in the most humblest way possible to the Author of this book please please please never write another book as long as you live. I didn’t know weather 2 different people wrote this book or a 12 year kid. How in the name of heaven you give the characters different names when it suits you like what the hell. Lorenzo (andrey) Audrey(hazel) Derek (Chris) oh let’s not forget Aaliyah her name was Aaliyah the first 15 chapters and then u just give her the name Amanda half way through this was the most confusing book I have ever read in my entire life and what’s with just randomly dropping the name Colleen every other sentence so freaking annoying I would say do better but I won’t just find another career path cause this ain’t it. Ughhhh and another thing at least 10 chapters where repeat chapters that I already paid for twice that really ticked me off. Absolutely ridiculous

About half way through the story at this point. Enjoying it with a couple of glitches in character name errors, also on characters that arr female, referenced as male then in the same paragraph changing back to female and such. Thrown off by a man who's supposedly a Mafia crime boss, having so many others allowed to get away with disrespecting his love without facing an iron fist from the man himself. He needs to start putting his foot in some asses!!

This book was a beautiful story but the writing was atrocious. Also, there was about 5-6 chapters repeated. Thats not fair to us who have to pay to read! We are paying for duplicate chapters for what? Thats not fair! These stories need to be edited and checked before posted. You will lose customers based on these types of issues. But otherwise i loved it. I wish it wouldve given me a little backstory of their happily ever after or what happens to lydia and miles.