Bride By Deadline Reviews

I love the story but the writer needs toto have an editor check continuity, repetition and advices on where to make a scene stretch and where extra focus wasn’t needed. If that makes sense. It’s not perfectly written but the story was good enough for me to want to finish it. So that’s something. I can see a second novel coming where Theo gets out of jail and goes after Liv and their child who is now at school. Theo is delusional saying the child is his not Ethan’s, claiming he has his way with Liv in the office that time when they first got together. Then there’s a cat and mouse chance as Theo seems one step ahead all the way, keeping just out of reach of Ethan when … well I wouldn’t want to spoil the end.

Your pretty creative. Please tell me you haven’t experienced any of what was in this story. That kind of trauma is hard to deal with on a good day. Most people don’t react well to guns pointed at them. PTSD is something very real. For the most part I enjoyed the whole story. Wish it had been a little longer and experience the getting a normal life for these two!And even watching the trails would have been fairly interesting. Take care looking forward to more of tour work

This was not a weak to strong character development in the story. The female main character was stronger at the beginning of the book than anywhere else and that really isn’t saying much. I felt there was too much repetition in the inner monologues. Constant questioning and doubt. I think the plot was interesting but would have been better with stronger characters. The villains were the only ones who even seemed to know what they wanted. Otherwise you might enjoy it.

Only 40 chapters in but so far it’s not too bad. I don’t like her sister or mother and I’m really hoping she’s not their bio child based on how they treat her but I guess only time will tell. I also hate her mother in law. Inviting an ex gf to a party being hosted in her house is just rude on so many levels. Tack on her simplicity and shyness this is going to make for one messy party.

Need more spicy scenes between Ethan and Olivia. There are some inconsistencies in the story line. The author should revise before posting it. At the start Mr. Harris was Ethan’s grandfather, then later he became Ethan’s father. The author repeats Olivia’s emotions quite often. The same old words. It makes the story run slow and boring. Need a more fast paced story line. There are some other little inconsistencies. Other than those enjoying the story of Ethan and Olivia. The story picked up pace later but it left me wanting. A chapter titled Ethan was actually Theo’s point of view. Ethan and Theo were at first cousins then they became brothers. There are many such mixed and muddled story lines. Someone should review the written material before you publish it. Very disappointed!

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Great story. I enjoyed this writers other books as well. Always holds my attention leaving me wanting more. 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 1 2 3 a a a a a a a a a a a a da. A a a a a a. A. A s a a a a d. A f v b h b b h bb g b. G go. Tv tv. C. Cv. F. Go. H. V 80 words is silly

Wow what a story so far .. I am totally engrossed and can’t put it down .. i honestly hope they get a happy ever ending and she proves all of them wrong especially her mother & sister and his horrible mother ! .. I also hope Ethan finds the strength to stand up for Olivia instead of being a wimp .. I would recommend this book to my friends and respect to the author it’s been a great read . Would definitely read more of these types of books

I'm enjoying the novel, can't wait for Olivia to show her enemies how strong she is. I love how she took charge of the decorations for the party. Now it's time to shut her sister up and show her mother that she is more than capable. Ethan needs to accept that he has caught feelings for his wife and he better protect her from his mother's guests. Diamond is my new favourite person after Mr Harris. Can we have more chapters with her.