BILLIONAIRE SECRET TWIN HEIR

This book is lacking in basic editing. Which is bad enough in its own way. However the real issue is the writing itself. I’m not sure if the writer was trying to do timeline jumps back and forth and failed miserably at it or is just too incompetent to stick to the years away and ages of the kids. The story itself isn’t a bad story but the lack of consistency in the timeline and story is truly horrible. The writer sets up a potential important scene then skips to days later and the scene never happens. This writer is also incredibly repetitive on the some things like the shared family traits like eye color. It’s repeated over and over and over to the point it’s plain ignorance of writing with filler. The constant need to say someone’s shirt or dress costs more than most make in several months of work is also quite overdone. The people are rich we understand they wear expensive clothes. This writer is lacking in the ability to write a book that is consistent and flows. They can’t seem to follow thru after setting the stage. This writer needs an exceptional editor or a ghost writer.