Babies for The Hot Billionaire Reviews

It kept me guessing on what was going to happen. When she moved back to town I was wondering what happened to her mother. Also how long it was going to take for them to meet again. How she was going to explain the children and how long before she gave him the bracelet back. What would happen when she ran into her ex fiance. Was Shawn going to come back into her life. How Conrad would react to the children and her keeping them from him.

The storyline drags on and there are too many typographical errors to count. You have only made the supporting cast of characters the people we need come to know well. The main 2 characters he sounds like a swine and she a whiner. How does it take 5 years for this woman to figure out that a waitressing does support a family of 5? The plot started out easy enough but has evolved into rambling messages of words thrown together. The amount of errors and lack of editing are obvious.

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It's a bit slow, and beats around the bush abit, and a few typos, but a good story, wish they would move it along a bit faster, and the chapters are very short, but in saying that, there are a few that are a good length, the children seem to be really cool, I can't wait for them to meet their daddy, and him to be so proud of them. And he gets to know his one night stand.

This was the most confusing and chaotic book I have ever read. I’m still trying to reconcile the beginning middle and end of this book. I believe that the author got lost and was trying to rewrite the story only to mess the timeline up. The end of the story just felt anti- climactic it was not a well written ending to the story it felt rushed . I’m willing to read something else from the author. Let’s hope it’s better.

Good Reid however, at times it became at times it became off centered. I did not know what was going on and it skipped around a lot and left people wanting to know what happened. I didn’t know or it did not say where the children were as it got closer to the end of the story then, when did she say that Shawn was an ex fiancé and when did she say that her other ex fiancé had came back into the picture all very confusing, but still a good read

I love it , it’s the best book I have read so far , keep it coming, everyone yall should read this book… it’s worth your time for sure … and to the author I like the way you write ❤️ keep doing this amazing job with your book hope you get it in a hard book at libraries I would buy it for sure , and I know some people will buy it too to have it at their house to read it any time

The details switched too often. The neighbor that turned possessive, could have been considered a creative twist, but the Vivian character didn’t make sense. That the children had met him and she had to admit that she had kids. It was too much. It felt sloppy. Which is sad as I really did like the characters and the primary story line. It felt like the author had a twist that they wanted to introduce, yet failed to make the story consistent

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So far am loving the story line is just hard with the grammatical error sometimes but is good all the same. Am hurt that Shawn didn’t confess his feelings earlier and I wonder how the ML and FL are going to recognize each other and how they will tolerate one another after they find out about what happened five years ago and how they kids are going to finally get to meet their daddy who their mom says has been on a business trip so far