Rejected by My Mate, Claimed by the Brooding Alpha CEO incelemeleri

I like the story and the characters so far. There is continuity and some character development but I'd like to see a little more depth to Kael. Maybe more interaction with the pack. Right now we've only seen the full pack twice I believe. Every interaction up to now has been very insulated. Just the family, which doesn't lend itself to pack behavior. Also we don't see any actual wolves or shifting. You would think that would be essential for a werewolf novel. Other than that I really like it.

The story as a whole was very intriguing and kept me on my toes at some point. Some chapters felt like the were repeating too much ans could have been a sentence or left out altogether. I wanted more for some chapters and storylines. All in all a very wholesome story about love, money and family. I wish we could have got a glimpse into thw children's futures or their mates and see how they would be as parents and grandparents.

The journey that this couple makes from meeting each other to the completion of the story is heartwarming & exciting. Not only is their story told but all of the ups & downs, accusations & threats, pack problems & more will keep you enthralled. You will find yourself anxious to hurry to the next chapter time & time again until you finally reach the end of the story & you gently sigh & warmly smile. It is a definite must read!!

I enjoyed this book think kael was a great alpha and sage a great luna I just think it started getting repetitive with the councils was like the writer couldn't find something else to happen within the family I think there could have been alot more to the story like maybe kids getting more targets there was no wolf wars really only one that wasn't to do with them I do think once the fake mate contract was in place the book started to get a little slow it was an ok read just won't ever read again

Overall, this was a good story and I enjoyed the plot. The characters and storyline kept me interested and made me want to continue reading. However, there were quite a few repetitive paragraphs that could have been removed or shortened, which would have reduced the number of chapters and improved the pacing. I also noticed several spelling and grammatical errors throughout the book that should have been caught. With stronger editing and less repetition, I think the story would have been even more enjoyable.

I’m loving this book I even bought coins just to get the rest to enjoy. I haven’t finished it yet but I don’t want to stop reading as with every chapter just keeps getting better and I love how Sage goes from feeling worthless to finding everything she’s ever wanted. And her mate sounds 😍so kind and supportive also stress baking fantastically funny. I love how you made her stronger as the more you read. Thank you

It’s a great storyline.I enjoyed the whole book except Sage constantly worrying about every little thing. She was constantly saying what if and Karl was constantly reassuring her. The great love they built from a one night stand was always at the forefront. their love language was ever present for each other and for their children. The fact that she was the child that had been stolen 22 years before and the intrigue all around it held your attention. It was a book you didn’t want to put down.

I truly enjoyed the story. I spent a whole day just immersed in it. Well done. Kept me driven to see what’s next. Sages insecurity was established yet her stating it as often as she did was a bit over kill. That is the one thing I noticed. it had just the right amount of sexual intensity. It was tasteful and intense. This was just what I needed to pass a lazy day. Not too long and not too short. I look forward to other works by this author.

This book is good dragging a bit a bit unrealistic yes believable. Not sure how I feel yet but I'm past halway in. Not the usual story but Alpha Novel has of the best books I have ever read. So I am having faith that my expectations will be met

This in my opinion is one of the best books that I have found on here. I'm looking forward to others by this author. She writes characters with depth and human feelings more like real people than ones made up for a story. I couldn't stop reading this and spent a couple of nights with my glasses and phone on my chest as I slept. I like that she moved through the years with this family. There's a lot of repeat writing that could have been left out of the main character needing to be comforted over and over with the same things she's already been told 5 times before, but that's as bad as it ever gets. There are some errors in names and places or story continuity but nothing major and nothing that terribly interrupts the story line. All in all I give this book an A.