Rejected by My Mate, Claimed by the Brooding Alpha CEO incelemeleri

The story is long and too much emphasis on her childhood. Discovering who did what, not enough interaction with spouse except for solving problems.i will continue reading to see if their relationship gets better. The parents relationship is different I honestly thought after all the loss they would react different with Aunt who had decided on her own not to share information about her still being alive. It seems her Luna powers are similar to other Luna's. Alpha Thorne mother is smart and has the same powers as daughter in law.

Well, I am continuing to read it, so it’s not terrible. The grammar, typos, and punctuation errors are really distracting, though. They definitely detract from the overall experience. I would like more character development and a clearer timeline. I feel like everything moves too quickly without giving things enough time to develop naturally. Overall, if you’re looking for something substantive, this isn’t it, but it is a fun “guilty pleasure” if you are looking for a quick and light read.

This is a nice story. The characters are positive. I enjoy the couple growing in their relationship. You have to pay close attention in keeping all the characters straight. The story moves quickly. It leaves you hanging onto each move as the story progresses. Every time the story turns a corner there is a surprise you don’t expect. I am at least half way through and have no idea how this is going to end. It’s a very nice read.

Haven't finished the book yet but loving the twists and turns! Sometimes its a little repetitive, almost like you are trying to make a word count limit so that was a little annoying. I cant wait to see what the end will bring and I am going to try and fill the remainder of my review so that I can get the coins. If you k ow what I mean! I only have 10 left so this was enough. Bye!

This story was great.I liked that it wasn't to prolonged, that the two heros got together soon within a lot of other people who stood in there way. There wasn't a return of a first love, or a wicked mother in law who can't let go of a grown son. The pregnancy, I could of did without, too many stories have this scenario, married or not. Really like how he loved and protected her. Really good reading. Keep up the good work.

I have loved this story, it's the first one I've read that didn't go into detail about their sex session. Thank you. Following Sage's story has been great. The trails have kept me transfixed. It was amazing how many people were involved in her journey, both good and bad. The ability to band together and forge forward as a family has been great. I'm really looking forward to your next book I hope it is as captivating as this one has been. Thank you again for such a great novel I have recommended it to my friends

Fairly good story, slow to start and can be boring at times like some others can be. About half way through it gets more interesting. However, lots of grammatical and spelling errors. Names get mixed up at times. Time lines of events often don't match between chapters. The way the chapters are written makes the reader feel that there's multiple writers of this story. So far I give it a 7/10 rating. There's a lot of improvement needed including proofreading before posting. Should have been written as a teen book, about 2/3 through is mainly about their 2 children, and what they go through. Once second child was born, should have began another book, not 20 or so chapters about them.

This novel shows how family, understanding, love, faith within and peace can outlast any and all of the negativity that people bring forth. Sage and Kael's relationship began due to an attraction that manifested into true love and adoration. Sage had to learn to love herself and to understand her worth as a woman, a mate, a Luna, a mother, and a newly discovered daughter. This novel helps readers to find their strengths and love themselves no matter what they go through. I enjoyed reading this novel. I think that this is something that once you begin you can't put it down.

I liked this novel so far it is so excited to read. Yeah he was a dick head at the beginning and I understand why, I'm glad he kn w that everyone is not her. So glad he is doing anything for her & everyone else glad she found her family to bad to bad that she is getting hunted from all angles even her own family members. I get that everyone is scared of the unknown and change that she can do

I am enjoying the novel so far, it keeps me interested in what is next, to see what family secret is discovered next, or more details about the profecy. I find the novel to be different from the other ones I read so far, it's less focussed on the passionate relationship between the Alpha and the Luna, and more focused on the discovery of secrets and them navigating the rough waters of pack politics. There is another difference I noticed, not sure how relevant it is, however so far in every novel a Luna pregnancy was only 3 months, and in this one it's 9 months, as humans have. I will keep on reading until the end, I want to see what happens next.