My Fiance's Brother's Forbidden Game incelemeleri

Thank you for sharing your writing. The novel is enjoyable to read, however, the ending is abrupt. It raises more questions than it answers. I liked the length of the chapters, they dealt with an appropriate amount of content. Most of the characters were well developed. Maybe you could push that envelope even further? More background would enrich the story. It was frustrating for me to read the grammatical errors. Was this not proofread? Fewer errors would also enrich the story. And, please, make the tenses agree. A number of times it jumped around in a sentence. Please keep writing and take your stories all the way to the end. Well done!