Evangeline, The Wish Of The Mobster yorumları

I love the plot of the book, bit it's very difficult to read, seems like the writer is not English speaking and the translator used did a very bad job, the pronouns are 90% wrong, it's difficult because while reading one needs to constantly correct the book, other than that I love the book and am hoping I don't abandon it purely out frustration because of the flaws, and I sincerely hope it's not gonna take forever bidding around the bush.