Recenzje: The Billionaire’s Last Clause

At chapter 30 when posting this review, I am really enjoying this story. Side note: Amelia's dream in chapter 25, whoa🔥! The fact that so much has happened already means there is more to venture through with Amelia and Daniel. Amelia's emotional roller-coaster after her divorce is understandable, the end of a long marriage is not something you get over in a few weeks, or even months for most people. But she is setting boundaries to protect herself. Daniel's situation is relatable as well. He is the clear example of the saying "hurt people will hurt people." I have plenty more chapters to go and I am excited!😁

It was a good story. Some parts were not consistent. A lot of repeat sayings. Almost like mantras. I know Amelia and Daniel are the main characters but what about the rest of them. Did Harper have a baby? What about Nathan and Oliver? You talk about his dad while he was still a part of the company then nothing at all. The moms are a big part in some and then no mention at all. And unrealistic for a 5 yo to be talking about engineering. ADHD doesn’t make you a genius.

Good character development. The building tension through the terrorizing events was well done. The ways that Amelia used her creativity to not only deal with her trauma but to help others through their own struggles was inspiring, although I kept waiting for someone new to take an active and perhaps volatile move to stop Amelia from speaking and writing about her truths. For example, someone who was unable to see the need to change — someone who would blame her for providing help to his victim. Overall, enjoyable story.

Normally this type of second chance romance book is not really my cup of tea. But From the moment I read the short teaser of this story I was seriously considering. Ever since I started reading I can’t put it away and am honestly so invested in how the story might go on. Especially the thoughts of Daniel, how he loves her and fights for her or doesn’t pretend like he does not care anymore particularly infront of Lydia (even though he really f*ck*d up in the first place) and the storyline and dialogues as well are written wonderfully. This book turned out to be exactly what I was looking for and how I would imagine such dialogues and plot developments.

The story line is good, but their are a bit of inconsistencies. I guess that is expected in this kind of app. It is a place to let new writers get themselves started. It would be nice if they even had a friend help with some editing to catch grammar and inconsistencies. I do have to say that this is one of the better stories. Nothing that takes away from the story line or makes it confusing. Some stories on here I stopped reading because of the horrible grammar and spelling where you didn't even understand what was being said. I really do like this one.

The novel is great keeps you on your toes the whole time it’s a must read book about betrayal rebuilding your life and finding love one more time with the same person that destroyed you she is a better person then me but at the same time she learned to love her self first it’s not always good to forget that you matter and any part of your life always put yourself first in every avenue of life

Me está gustando mucho está novela, siento que Amelia tiene mucho que crecer, la verdad espero que no termine con Daniel, pero supongo que es inevitable... Al final creo que si se aman de verdad. Pero la cobardía de Daniel es evidente... Es triste que todos se hubieran dado cuenta menos el.... Lo bueno es que pronto el se va a ver obligado a sufrir, porque estoy segura de que Amelia se va a alejar y va a encontrar a alguien mas

This novel is a pretty good read I’m enjoying it more now than in the beginning. Knowing that it has a nice plot and seems like it could happen in everyday life is nice too. It has more wanting how the story end now and has grab my attention. This is a great read. My only question is that will Daniel find some way to screw this up and let her walk out for good or will he win her back!

Great novel! Full of nearly every emotion one might find in a novel: surprise, devastation, anger, sadness, hurt, fear, anticipation, dread, hope, and ultimately relief, triumph and happiness. Loved reading the different POVs and that it didn't have every character with a say. Love the realism of life imperfect written throughout and the twists the story took at the pennicle. There were some confusing timeline errors and character mix-ups, but one can still follow the story and continue on without getting lost.

This is awesome, soooo real. Well, maybe not all of it, you know like the bad guys. I guess it might not be too far fetched. I would have never guessed Lydia would have done a 360 right before she gets out of prison. I don't think I would have believed her confession of turning over a new leaf. I never expected that. The kids grown up, doing their thing, feels real. The novel has a great ending