Sweet Demon Reviews

Dear Writer, thank you for the story. Loved the story line, but at times it was confusing. The he she context was confusing, when you meant she you said he and visa versa for the opposite sex. More description could have been given at time as it was not enough. Thought Luci would have become stronger as the story as a person and personality. Thought she would have become more like the "Demon", but had a weak character until the end. Luci's hopeless character drove me insane. Will dying that made me sad, was hoping he and Adam relationship was more reflected in the book. But like I said, Awesome story line and I enjoyed it. Thank you L

This was a good read! I loved the characters, the storyline, and the fact that it was near impossible to predict what would come next! 'Sweet Demon' grabbed and held on to my attention, and I found myself wanting more and more with each and every chapter that I read. Despite the issues with the pronouns, I thoroughly enjoyed this book. I was gripped with intrigue from cover to cover!

I'm completely captivated by your novel! The raw portrayal of the protagonist's struggles with her alcoholic father is heartbreakingly real, and the introduction of a compassionate neighbor who offers her refuge creates a compelling dynamic. I'm particularly drawn to the development of their relationship amidst such difficult circumstances. The twist of the male lead's mafia connections adds an intriguing layer of suspense and raises so many questions about what's to come. Your writing beautifully balances despair with budding hope, making for a truly gripping read. I'm eagerly anticipating the rest of this journey!

I really struggled with this story. On one hand the actual storyline was amazing and kept me coming back for more and more. However the writing was terrible and made it so hard to read. Constantly getting the gender references wrong ruined it on so many levels as it’s just throws you when you keep referring to the men as her and she and the women as him and he. It was like it was written by a robot or someone who does not know English. Two tips 1. get someone to proof read your work before releasing and 2. If you can write in English don’t.

This was one of the best novels I have read in quite some time!! It was entertaining to say the least. It was dramatic to keep reeling you in with all twists and turns!! The last twenty chapters especially made it so you didn't want to put it down until it was done!! The ending was sweet and refreshing. It also didn't leave you hanging trying to figure parts out still!! The only issues I had was could have used some more proof reading!! Quite a few pronoun mix ups along with some names but nothing you couldn't figure out if you were paying attention!!

A decent storyline that if you read between the lines, you’ll figure out the pronouns that are incorrect. If the grammar was corrected, it would be a great read. I do wish towards the end that there was a little more detail as to each of the main characters and how their lives went on from there. It’s one of the better stories that I’ve read recently and I would recommend anyone giving it a chance themselves.

This is a rather unique novel and I’m very invested in the book. The story is written in a way that you can not predict the outcome of the next page as you read. However poor editing / proof reading is very much letting this novel down. Unfortunately I do have to reread some pages to reaffirm what the story is interpreting. However that aside it is a good book that has the reader invested in the story. I am looking forward to seeing how the story develops.

This book has a really great story line! I only wish the author would have had someone else proof read it for them before sharing it because the “Him’s and her’s” are almost all opposite of what they should be, so you really have to think in order for it to keep making sense or you have to re-read parts so you can actually understand if the author is talking about a man or a woman! Other that that, like I said, the story line is really amazing. It’s deep and full of emotion and I’ve cried at least three times while reading parts I wish I didn’t relate to. Looking I’m looking forward to seeing where the author takes the story and what will happen next! Good job author! 💕

La historia empezó muy bien. Pero el eteeno conflicto inexistent de la protagonists da mucha pereza. Sin eso la historia sería genial. Por otro lado. Hay miles de aplicaciones con las que puedes corrregir los errors de concordancia. Sí no sabes un idioma no trastes de traducir tu las cosas. Quedan espantosas. Tienes potential. Pero o escribes bien en tu idioma o aprender bien inglés. O invierte en un traductor. Realmente es muy difícil descifrar cada vez de quien hablas

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