Two Alphas Fighting Over Me Reviews
Melanie
I have to say it was a great novel from start to finish. Loved the main characters and their plot to marry. Seemed easy in the beginning but as time went on and they fell in love it seemed like the contract might be disregarded. I was happy when Nancy made up with her father thanks to matteaus. Definitely a great storyline and the plot thickened as the story went on. In all it was a very good read and had me captivated from the start. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for a great storyline to read again.
January 4, 2026Jan
There were good chapters, but, I feel that info was not well developed between chapters. The break between sets of characters was too abrupt and I almost thought I broke into a new book altogether. I still enjoyed reading it, though! I would have liked yo be updated on Ella and Oliver's story. Did they have kids? Also, Nancy seemed so differrent when she entered into the marriage contract not at all like I expected from her initial introduction.
December 22, 2025S
This novel made me smile and laugh. It gave moments of worrying that love would go unrequited but it mainly made me laugh and smile. It says 18 +, but it's not super spicy which is okay not everything has to be over the top spicy. It was nice to laugh while reading and smile. I thought it was almost like two books in one. At one point I felt almost lost. The title is a bit deceiving. But like I said it's a nice novel.
December 22, 2025Jules
Enjoyed the novel. It was fun to read, I was laughing or smiling throughout the book. This was a bit different where the alphas were not domineering but totally goofy, had a fun side while showing their emotions and affection for their Luna. The main female characters were portrayed as being strong and totally badass. I loved Ella’s character and how Oliver was devoted to her. Nancy was a little firecracker and no nonsense vibe. It was overall a good book.
November 30, 2025Penny May
Jackson is an idiot. He deserves to have lost Ella. In what way does he even think it's okay to talk about her the way he did. Oliver is a very good man. He will never hurt her. I wonder how long it will be before he let's Ella know that he has loved her for years from the shadows. How long before she figures out that he is the one whose posts she has been following and she is who it's about?
November 14, 2025