The Vampire's Omega Reviews

In complete love and awe of this book. This is what love, togetherness, care, belongingness feels like. It gives hope actually. I really loved all the heroic characters Bella, Blade, Kurt. They made love happen. The story is beautiful. At times, words feel less when describing the best of things & this happened with this story. Amazing, amazing and amazing. I m thankful to the author to bring such an amazing work- where you understand the meaning of growing together and loving. Thanks dear author.

Wow from the pack Omega to a bad ass queen 😃 it's just a pity her first mate abused her and took her for granted but like they say one man's lost is another's man's gain 😊 but in my opinion I would say she's a much better match with her Vampire king 🥰 then that silly and arrogant werewolf mate of her's who didn't even want her but still didn't want to let her go how selfish of him and that fake mate of his who now had an eye on the vampire king 🤭 too bad for her he doesn't even want to glance at her unless it's to kill her 🫢

This was a great book the only sad part was Kurt that hurt I wasn't expecting that but overall great book Bella 😊 well worth the read I can't wait to start on my next exciting book the author did a good job with this book the story line kept you on your toes it had funny parts and sad parts Bella is a strong warrior who didn't know was an Alpha the part how she was abused did something to me that you for the read

I am really enjoying this book.. I Like how the characters evolve throughout well. There's a few characters. I can't stand there's a few I love and there's a few that are hilarious. But the story line is fantastic. I can't really wait for Bella to break out of her show and show her old pack. What's really coming? Especially Lucas, and what's up with that Doctor? The mother is absolutely hilarious.Especially her interactions with Kurt. The mother is so genuine with bella

With changes I feel like this story could be great. Most of which being grammar and word usage. It’s really kind of ruining it a bit. But I read really bad translated manga, so the constant errors aren’t completely killing it for me cause my mind is so used to self editing. But it’s still bothersome and distracting from the story it self. Anyways I need to hit 80 words…. It's supercalifragilisticexpialidocious Even though the sound of it is something quite atrocious If you say it loud enough you'll always sound precocious Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious

I love the story. It keeps me up late reading all night. Can't seem to put the book down. I like how sweet the shewolf is, and how she has a beautiful effect on he vampire king that is so mighty and fearfull. I love how The vampire king's mother plays a big part in Bella's new life. How Bella feels she can open up to the vampire king's mother. Open up so much to her that she calls her mother.

It needs to be proof read. Other then that it's a good story. I'm sure I have read this story before. It flows really well, keeps you interested. Sometimes would like it to flow more quickly and have more content. 35 chapters in and it does not feel like a lot has happend. It gets confusing sometimes with the he's and the she's mixed up. I hope the story ends out well and starts progressing soon. The start of the story was not that creative, but after she escaped it was better.

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It started really interesting just the grammar is getting in the way. I think this was written in a Slavic language and translated by google. Which you should never do unless you have some understanding of the language it is translated into. I like the idea of an omega with a vampire but the writing is letting it down. Rules that are off. It takes to long for her to get together with the king and tell him what happened. The alpha is going to invite the worst enemy to a party. I mean come on.

The story line was great overall. The grammar, spelling and organizing of thoughts have a lot of work to be done. Mixing characters names, sentences not flowing together etc made it very difficult to read and understand at times. I'm glad I pushed through the first 3 chapters otherwise I would not have enjoyed the book. More research should be done into the world of the mythical since vampires have covens and not packs. There are a few other things that was also not factually correct pertaining to the respected creatures. The book ended on a massive cliff hanger and I hope there will be a continuance of the story. Potentially with better writing