The Unwanted Mate Reviews

The male lead’s transformation is the heart of the story. His journey from a self-absorbed flirt to a protective and devoted mate is both emotional and rewarding. The she-wolf is equally compelling, portraying strength, independence, and vulnerability as she navigates her growing feelings without understanding their true source. Together, their chemistry is electric, building tension and anticipation with every interaction. The narrative is a perfect mix of humor, romance, and suspense. The witty banter between the protagonists keeps the story lighthearted, while the underlying emotional depth draws readers in.

Evelyn is a young omega and is rescued bu alpha Keiran when she is ambushes bu the rogues. She then finds the powerful alpha is her mate but he is going to reject her. This novel is a great read. I can't put it down and can't wait to see what is going to happen in the next chapters. The characters are well thought out. I like the story line and that she is finding hereself and her place without changing who she is.

All I'm saying is that Kieran needs to get his act together. I wonder why she is being hunted and why her father was killed. Maybe it has something to do with her affinity with animals. I wonder how Kieran is going to take it when he finds out that she has been training with one of his betas. Honestly as her mate and alpha he should have been the one training her this entire time. And how has he not heard from his warriors about her knife throwing skills?

I really like this book so far. It did started off a little bit iffy but turned out to be very enjoyable. So much so I can’t put it down. It has an interesting storyline and not so much of the toxic relationships other novels have. It shows how the female lead grow and how that growth changes the male lead’s perceptions of her. I am only halfway, but still find the story captivating. This novel is highly recommended. Looking forward to the rest of the book. Kudos to the author!

The novel was great .. enjoyed reading from the very first time. Was hard to put away on days I was busy. Very well written. Enjoyed the final pfre chapters. Intense but so rewarding to read. Very good description of the male omega n the garden his mother made. Pictured the omega in my mind as I read. Sadly it took his best friend to die before his mate finally accepted him. In the end, was glad he apologized to his mate. Thank you for your story.

Its okay. I read The Predator first which is sort of a sequel, I guess. But the stories are practically duplicates of each other. A hunted omega, lives in the forest (or jungle based on the fact that there are mangoes and monkeys, but she calls it a forest), gets mated to an alpha who treats her like shit cuz shes an omega but eventually the alpha gives in. Meanwhile, the omega pines away for this dickhead and stutters her way through the luna role. I mean, its a decent story but it's identical...

Really nice story so far. Has an interesting plot with a lot of interesting characters. I hope that some of the characters have good growth and don’t just remain as they are. I hope that the main female character will have a good growth and not be the quiet character for the whole story and that the main male character will also have a nice growth that you can see the change so it isnt just a sudden change

Great book! Loved the story and how the relationship between the couples grew. Evelyn is such a star and loved her development. Hopefully we get to see more of them in the future. See more of Evelyn’s powers and how they grow. Maybe a story about the beta couple in the future???? To see how one girl can change the hearts and minds of the people around her and impact the future generations is beautiful. Ready to read your next book:)

I normally write a review only after finishing a novel, but I don’t see myself reading much more of this. The plot is incredibly predictable - Evelyn goes from weak, timid mouse, unable to speak without stuttering, to headstrong badass warrior, who singlehandedly takes down adult alpha men considerably bigger than her (because strength is solely measured by how much ass you kick I guess), after just a few weeks of training, and magically solves everyone’s problems. She falls for Kieran because he’s hot, forgiving all of his physical, verbal and sexual abuse after he manages to avoid insulting her for one conversation. Kieran is trash, pure and simple. The worst, however, is Rain, a male omega who acts and talks like a child. A YOUNG child. And everyone treats “the boy” like one too, constantly ruffling his hair, pinching his cheeks, and calling him cute. The knowledge that he’s soon going to get a mate (and his worst bully at that!), genuinely makes me ill. As for the world, it doesn’t feel supernatural in the slightest. Despite being werewolves, they fight with guns, knives, hand-to-hand, or even trained animals, and Evelyn is a vegetarian animal rights activist. The only magical element is the mate bond, which forces people who hate each other to lust after each other. The more I think about this novel, the less I like it. I have zero hope for it, especially after learning that the author also wrote one of my most hated novels on this app. I think I’m quitting it before I have to stomach reading about the little kid in an adult’s body entering into a romantic (and worse, sexual) relationship with his vicious bully.

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