The Unwanted Mate Reviews

The male lead’s transformation is the heart of the story. His journey from a self-absorbed flirt to a protective and devoted mate is both emotional and rewarding. The she-wolf is equally compelling, portraying strength, independence, and vulnerability as she navigates her growing feelings without understanding their true source. Together, their chemistry is electric, building tension and anticipation with every interaction. The narrative is a perfect mix of humor, romance, and suspense. The witty banter between the protagonists keeps the story lighthearted, while the underlying emotional depth draws readers in.

Evelyn is a young omega and is rescued bu alpha Keiran when she is ambushes bu the rogues. She then finds the powerful alpha is her mate but he is going to reject her. This novel is a great read. I can't put it down and can't wait to see what is going to happen in the next chapters. The characters are well thought out. I like the story line and that she is finding hereself and her place without changing who she is.

I enjoy the characters very much! Evelyn has a very very slow growth and Keiran's coldness is perplexing, but the characters around them are incredibly lovable and sweet. It's nice to see multiple characters shine, not just the romantic interests! I haven't finished yet but I am hoping the progression continues as it is going. Hopefully Evelyn goes through that big change to finally grant her confidence soon! I'm excited to see where conflicts properly arise, considering as of now I has only been romantic issues!

A great great great read thus far. It's perfect. It's a new twist on werewolf stories. It's impressive. I can't wait to see what powers the luna unlocks. There must be a reason why they want her dead. However it's demeaning how they treat omegas. I am glad the luna is an omega. There will be more respect for them eventually. Everyone will be able to see their value, worth and benefits. The story is still unfolding with the love growing everyday

Overall, the book is well-written with a solid and decently paced storyline that keeps readers engaged without feeling rushed or dragging on. The plot moves forward with enough intrigue and tension to maintain interest from start to finish. The main character, while embodying the traits typically seen in werewolf stories, was endearing and likeable for the most part, displaying moments of vulnerability and strength that made them feel more well-rounded. Though they follow a familiar archetype, the author managed to make this character feel fresh and engaging in their own right.

I am really loving this book so far!! The characters and plot are interesting and pretty well developed. The mystery around Evelyn's backstory and whomever she's running from is subtle yet intriguing. Okay, and her gift with animals?!?!?!? She's changing hearts, minds, and long held traditions that were due for a change. I love Keian's parents! It is nice to see the Alpha family dynamic in three generations with his parents and grandparents. We seedifferent aspects of Keian's character as an Alpha, son, grandson and lover. Interesting

This is my second book on here. I'm so hooked on it. The way it's written and just reading how he started hating her but is slowly falling for her is so ughhh. I cannot explain or express my feelings. This is a type of book that makes you wish theres a second one. This has to be one of my favorite "he hated her but ends up loving her" trope. I haven't stopped reading since I started this book !

Wow what a rollercoaster story. From being a small afraid child,who just wants to be left alone, to a powerful luna. The Alpha hates her and what she represents. A weak,feeble omega with no wolf. How can he be mated to her but with time they both start to change. The feelings they have towards each other start to change from hatred to love. The story of the pack dynamics is fascinating and the side story's are both heart breaking and soul soothing. This is a must read.

This has a really beautiful storyline and I enjoyed every bit of it. The anticipation, the waiting for the next day to come to watch ads and read the next 5 chapters. Although I still prefer when I was time based to unlock a chapter but it's worth the million ads. Short, precised, and straight to the point. No unnecessary dragging on the story to make it longer. I just didn't like the fact that the writer kept referring to Rain and Eveyln as omegas, apart from that it was good with a nice happy ending.

The story was great I would love to have sequels. Mabye there is I will have to look for them. I wish some of the chapters didn’t have so much spread out space I feel like we pay a lot to read a story to have a chapter look king page wise but really short word wise. That is alittle disappointing. Still love the story. I hope in your next ones you give proper chapters. Thank you for your stories.