The Ruthless Alpha King Reviews

Ahhh the Ruthless Alpha king. He was pretty fucked up in the beginning. She took so much but her strength prevailed. Again I love reading these stories, but the misspellings annoy me a bit. It doesn’t take much time to reread your work. It was an easy read and kept me entertained. I really wish each chapter had a set count amount. I’m not sure why the amount changes. Anyway this one a the third story I’ve read here. Happy reading everyone.

What I liked was that it's a short story, the storyline was good. The ML was a acted the label as a cruel tyrant King. Could of had a bit more of a backstory of his past particularly around Bella who just appeared as the other women as Archers, love of his life...like hard to even visualize her into the storyline. As for Sariah her low self esteem and not knowing her identity because of mistreatment & family abuse to then her having Moon Goddess powers some of that backstory could of been revealed earlier. Overall added and extra 8-10 chapters with nackstory on both Archer n Sariah & Betty. Also time spent correcting editing and grammer errors that were in the 50 chapters and I found annoying that dosnt justify the $38 spent on the read will hopefully assist you with other books. The bones if the storyline as I said was good. Be encouraged and great writing success in the future.

I gave this book for readings because I love the storyline and the way the author build up each character. I like the moral of the story that no matter how weak you are as long as you believe in yourself you can be as great as you want to be. I'm really hoping that they could write a second part so that we can know what happened to the future heir of the kingdom "Zeus" maybe the story of him growing up and finding his own Queen

The story line was good. BUT, the writer is not that good u unfortunately. There are a lot of wording errors, wrong words used and parts that just don't make sense no matter how you try to read it. If I would have known all of this before I purchased the book I would not have. I feel the author just didn't even proof read their book or have an editor proof read it. Like I said, good story just poorly written.

It could be a really good novel. Lines are too often repeated and the author quite frequently forgot who was speaking. It became a battle to continually correct the grammar in my head as I read. Don’t leave your editing to the AI capabilities. It doesn’t know which word you want when the word you have chosen is also correct. Ex: hair instead of heir. Please for the readers sanity, utilize an editor or proofreader to look over your work.

Well, this was interesting, different from a lot of books I have read, yet I stuck with it, a little juvenile if I may say, but still stuck with it, a little editing could help, anyway about the book,Sarah was a fighter,then a weakling then an arrogant slave, and when did she get powers? Why was there never a part of them manifesting, or just anything, oh and now their wolves aren't a part of them, it's like they are their pets?

I get that this was translated, or English isn't the first language here, but this was bad. Story was all over the place, repeated everything multiple times. She loved him but still acted like a spoiled brat. And her anyways saying she was nothing not a luna but she was an alphas daughter with the moon powers? I read it to the end but it was bad!!! And I hate that I have to use 80 words in a review!