The Rejected Luna. Reviews

It started out okay and I have been waiting for it to improve however it is hard to follow the story line. It jumps around a lot and the grammatical editing needs work. I am still hopeful that it will improve. I am not really sure who exactly the main character is in this story. I thought it was the female werewolf that was stated as being wolf less, however we keep jumping to the vampire who helped her and back to the mare who rejected her so I'm kinda confused.

Well written, like how the POV of each character goes along with the current situation and flows. No jumping back and forth. Really enjoyable. Seeing Cassadra grow into her own is awesome. Her character is intriguing and hoping to see her character become strong. Hoping Smith does get his butt beat and that Jason finds Cassandra again. I am really looking forward to seeing how the whole story plays out. Keep up the amazing work and I look forward to reading more.