The Rebirth of the Betrayed Luna Reviews

Love the intrigue, and can’t wait for the back story on her time with the Rogues. The back and forth with her family is a bit much, but so is anyone that goes against a main character that is well liked. Love the wilderness aspect on the island as it shows Lorelei is the ultimate badass and who we all wish we could be in moments of stress and or conflict. Can’t wait to see how she saves the Alpha….

I like it so far as long as there is an actual point to it all I will be happy. When the bad guys win it ruins it for me. I can’t wait to find out exactly what Lorelei went through. Here’s hoping the next chapters will reveal more answers. I do like how it shows in real time how easily people can be manipulated by what is posted on social media without actually knowing the truth behind the story.

I found the novel always keeping you interested in the next chapter and then the next. Always something happening to keep you opening the next Chapter! Not sure where the next drama is going to show up, however the build up to it is interesting. I like how easily friendships are made and to see the growing loyalty from both the men and the women on the the B team. Hopefully they remain friends or close once the reality show is over!

loving this original story different from all the others if you’ve read one you’ve read them all but this is totally original good writing characters are being built gradually which makes story interesting and refreshing waiting on the big bang hope they expose the pack for who they are and lorielle gets her revenge and happy life with alpha kieth as for her family they deserve to be destroyed and winnie exposed as the master manipulator can’t put it down

This story is great, I like how lorilie is slowly destroying everyone who bullied her and put her down. I think Winnie is getting exactly what she deserves, she makes women look bad. I’m hoping lorilie will cure Keith and solve who poisoned him, it would be good if she also gets her old pack jailed after taking everything from them, leaving them to live with the consequences of how they used and treated her, I can’t wait for the rest of the story to unfold.

Really enjoying the change of pace of a typical mate rejection story! Having them as actors, on a reality show, living in a more typical environment is really refreshing! I hope the story continues in the same vein, and that winnie gets whats coming to her. Actually like the 'conniving adopted she-wolf' character being placed in a situation that shows her true colours in a more modern type way, and I look forwards to lorelie and alpha Keith's relationship developing, I hope they both leave her brothers and adopted sister in the dirt!

I have really enjoyed this novel, so far. Good descriptions, really well thought out plot and interesting history. The editing is reasonably good and the length of chapters is okay. I was under the impression that this novel was complete but I assume it has a way to go. This will mean leaving the novel whilst reading others a returning at a later date and starting again. I enjoyed the writing style and the information on device management.

Definitely need more of this story! The strong female lead is refreshing and entertaining. So many of these books have the lead clumsy and vapid when leading men are involved. Please post new chapters soon, I would hate to lose this story because it goes unfinished for too long! This book I’d definitely a rare gem of a story. Is the author coming back I know it has been more than a month since the last update. So sad to see a story end without a definite resolution to all story lines!

I am truly enjoying this novel. I love how the true colors of Winnie and her fanboy crew are being exposed and how the difficult circumstances are even causing those same fanboys to get impatient with her princess complex. I can't stand that mother of theirs though. How can she so thoroughly despise her own real daughter?! Lorelei is absolutely phenomenal and her blind and biased family are trash. I'm glad her husband's pack leadership see her value and are fighting them for her. I hope Lorelei's blinded, shameful family keep getting more and more karma and dirt exposed. Hopefully even get slapped with the reality of despicable and stupid they've been about the malicious Winnie and the treasure Lorelei that they've not cherished. I hope I soon see the Frostfang alpha family drown in regret.

Characters were strong in the ladies department! Mother was rotten to the core! Brothers were nasty! Interesting to see the bad ones getting ugly! Good story! Enjoyed it! Wanted to know who poisoned her husband! I think the story should go on with this couple to see them getting together! The sister turned ugly why ? Was it happened because she looked into her past! Nice to see girl power with the girls! Nice that she forgot Susan and became good friends!