The Pack's Royal Doctor; 3-Time Rejected Omega Reviews

For the majority it was a good story, however it ended unfinished so not happy with this. There is more to this story but can't find a continuation. All the characters have unfinished business and some characters appear out of the blue with no explanation or back story to explain who they are. The story also jumps from one storyline to another making it sometimes difficult to follow. As I said this has finished without any endings so I only hope there is more to read.

I really like this novel and hope that more chapters are available soon. I can't believe it was allowed to end rhe way it did. I really wanted to continue reading and find out what happened to Joey. I hope she gets severely punished for what she did and has done to Danika. I also hope that the Alpha marks Danika soon and makes her his Luna. What is he waiting for? I hope a second book or more chapters come soon.

The movement is great so far! I can not wait until Alexander and Dani stop fooling around and tell each other they are mates. Dani needs to stand up for herself more and stop thinking the worst. Xander needs to find Dani and punish every one who is demeaning her for nothing. I can not believe the audacity of people to treat some one like they treat her. I realize it is just a novel but it breaks my heart to think there are people out there who actually treat people that way.

I enjoyed the book so much I wished they at least got married because he loved her so selfless and pure it was just breathtakingly beautiful. It deserves a part 2 because I still can not stop thinking about it. Thank you so much 😍😍😍 also after he declined to marry the daughter from that other pack ruled by their Luna nothing happened was expecting some kind of retaliation from them but it's like they jut accepted that sometimes things won't always go our way and it's okay.

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I love the story. It has a great plot and good pacing. The only problem is with the grammar and sentence structure. This feels like it was written by a person who's first language is not English. An English proof reader would make this novel perfect. I hope the author continues writing and works at improving the grammar and syntax in the stories. I love stories about healers and the individual raising themselves up from the depths of despair to rise up and grow into strong, independent beings. Good job!

Straight from the beginning, you get immersed in the story and you want to know what will happen to Danica. You will get annoyed because you know what should happen but there are twists and turns and it doesn't happen. You want to see that the villains get what they deserve and it is infuriating to know that they get away with it for so long. Great story,it has all the good bits of the fictional story you have learnt to love with plenty of steaming scenes!! You will love it!!!

Really loved this story! How you get to follow the characters in there point of view. And how detaild the feelings, people and movements were through out the whole story is absolutely mindblowing. Would definitivly recommend to other readers if they would want to read a good book. The story was really capturing through out the whole book. It takes a good author to really have the readers captured from start to finish. I applaud the author enormously for creating this work of art!

Lois Lowry’s The Giver is a thought-provoking novel that explores the cost of a perfect society. Through Jonas’s journey, the book examines themes of freedom, memory, and individuality in a clear but powerful way. The simple writing style makes complex ideas easy to understand, while the emotional moments leave a strong impact. Overall, the novel encourages readers to question rules, conformity, and the value of human emotion. It is a meaningful, engaging read for students and adults alike everywhere today.

I have enjoyed this book so far. There are grammatical errors but nothing terrible. The idea of the story is there but I think that the author lost a little. The back stories arw not that strong and could use some rereading and fixing.. I have gotten lost on some parts but the story is good. I am not trying to be mean about the writing just be helpful for tour next book. I am really enjoying the story though and can't wait to see how it ends.