The Omega Mate He Despised Reviews

Is an ok book so far. I had high hopes for this book but it hasn’t impress me yet. I really don’t know what else i can expect from this book and I am kind of disappointed but hopefully its get better the more i read. There is nothing exciting, no twist, it feels rush but it drags on some parts that are not relevant. I dont think this book is for me. Hopefully this book will surprise me before i quit reading.

Good storyline and plot twist. You seriously need a proofreader, dictionary and a thesaurus. I hate to see good books ruined by improper grammar, spelling and repeated paragraphs as tho the cut and paste did not work properly. The potential to be an excellent writer is there, it just needs to be honed!! I’m also not a fan of the commentary or the author inserts after a few chapters, it’s either a read worthy book or it’s not. Other authors do not ask for this in printed books- Believe in yourself and trust that you are a valued writer- don’t look for validation every couple of chapters. Marla