The Last White Wolf Reviews

I loved this novel from beginning to end. It was happy, sad, terrifying, amazing in so many ways Il would recommend this novel to anyone that loves a love story, a suspense, a mystery and everything in between I hope there will be a sequel! Would love to read the next last white wolf !!!! This took a young girl with such a hard life into one of the most amazing characters you would ever want to read about. The hardship, love and the miracles are all worth the reading of this beautiful book!!!

Well I really enjoyed the story but the editor of this story did a terrible job of it. I always thought that the story was supposed to be proofread and checked for mistakes. Names were incorrectly spelled he/ she were used incorrectly and there were pages and pages of nothing and then you would get a single sentence, then more empty pages then maybe a paragraph before more empty pages. This went on for ages until you get proper sentences and paragraphs again. It was a nice ending and will be good for a follow on.

So far I am enjoying it. I have come to really like novels about werewolves witches alphas and lunas. There have been some typos but I can see past that. I am nervous about the battle with drakoen, I really hope Mercedes can defeat him with the witches help. I very much love when novels are very detailed and fantasy and romance are becoming my favorite. I can also relate to troubled upbringings and it makes me happy fuor happy endings

I can't believe everything that went through and all the trials and tribulations. But in the end, everything worked out except she lost her wolf.I wish there would have been a twisted eat at the end to grant her another wolf, but I guess since her son has the strongest white wolf, ever it really doesn't matter. But I am curious if her daughter would have a wolf since she's only half wolf, but I guess we'll never know great job author.

Great story but no one has spell checked and there are so many mistakes in it grammatically It almost makes reading it not enjoyable. Close to stopping reading as it is costing me coins!! I do like the relationship between the characters and the fact that the luna has a history is great. I hope that I can see past the problems in the text to be able to finish the book instead of giving up. It seems to get worse as the book goes on.

This story is a bit of a slow starter and though I find the overall plot interesting it is a challenge to read each night. I just think it needs some more electricity between Mercedes and Felix. I feel like their physical attraction could have been taken to another level. I actually questioned the pull of the mate bond at first because they were able to resist each other. So I fee the story needs to be hotter with more action.

I really enjoyed this story. It was a good love story that went through all kinds of drama and turmoil ending up with two people that really loved each other. The story really needed proof read before being published. His/her/he/she were mixed up. Words were used that didn't make any sense.

This was such a deep love story! I enjoyed both male and female leading characters. They were strong while at the same time showing human frailties and flaws that we all have. The side/supporting characters were had their own stories that were touching and kept me rooting for them. Of course, the evil character was truly despicable and got his just desserts. Obviously, the ending left plenty of room for a Book 2 and I'm so there for it! My best advice for the author is to concentrate on proper pronoun usage. Thanks to the author for sharing their obvious storytelling talent! The technical grammar can be learned. A bright future for you!

I enjoyed the main story but it got really frustrating when about halfway through there was suddenly 200 odd pages on some chapters most of which where blank. It made reading the story more tedious having to skip 7,8 and even 9 blank pages at times only to get to read 1 line on the following page followed by another 7,8 or 9 blank pages and one line again. That was really really annoying. The grammar wasn't great it was understandable but there was times where i had to read things a few times to get what I was reading to make sense. If it wasn't for those issues it would have been a great story