The Kings Mate Reviews

Great story ! The ending is very abrupt so every one wonders what will happen to the rest of the characters.Actually you could have involved the little witch boy into an open end in order to get a head start for a sequel…this would have been awesome. Also the mystery arbour Phil being family was not revealed . How so? What happens to Kilian’s pup?.What happened to Natalia after she gave birth..and so on and so on ..so please write a following up!

I loved reading this book but I wasn't overwhelmed by the ending. I honestly hope there is a sequel to this novel. So much was left unsaid. It was a great read. I want to know what happened to several of the characters . Do Will and Genesis have children? What happened to Killian? Was his child born? So many answers left unsaid. The storyline was great and captured my interest from the first few pages. It's the kind of story you never want to end.

It started out good then went all over the place but I'm happy that it went the way that it went. It's nice to read a book with such suspense and action and love and violence and of course mythical animals and creatures so I'm looking forward to reading somewhere over your work absolutely love this book was mad and frustrated with the grammar at some point but for the most part I was able to understand what was being said

We Need a second book. We need to know what happened next. There was so much that was left out and i feel it was a little rushed here and there but overall good read. I feel like her character went through so much only to not know if she has a happy ending. I feel like maybe fast forwarding was good here and there but sometimes I needed a little more time with a scene. But hopefully we can get the closure we need.

Genesis is an amazing woman. To go through all she has and still keep putting on foot in front of the other is something we all wish we had the stamina to do. Having loved and hurt and loved again, opening her heart to will is something I want to read more of. I Want more of all the characters in the book. I want to know what drama comes next. How her father is and when or if he dies.

I enjoyed your book. I am glad that Genesis was finally able to find love. Will was a very strong support and appreciate his kindness. I wish Natalia’s pup was written as Jeremy’s from her affair. She didn’t deserve to carry Killian’s heir as he really didn’t deserve to have one. The sequel would be great and hope it includes more of Nana and Henry. Expanding the story of Claude and Faran would also be a huge bonus.

This is a good novel. Shows the true stages of a relationship but I would have loved if there was killian's perspective too about genesis. What's going on his mind and what is he feeling. It will give balance to the novel. Adding other people's perspective helps to understand the story and makes it more engaging. Also the suspense on genesis background is streching too long. Trying errors are there as well. Proofreading before publishing will help quite a lot

This book has so many twisting.Turns you don't know what's going to happen next.Minute, it's love the next minute.It's hate. Hoping for the best and then the worst comes around.You can feel the feelings of what the characters are feeling. It almost hurts your heart as much as it does with the love that comes off of this book. The author did a very good job of telling the story. I cannot wait to find out what is to come from the story.

I would rate this book higher if it wasn’t full of typos and the wrong words. It takes no time to go back and read what you have written. The main characters, the Lycan king and his mate are falling apart. He’s returned to his ex girlfriend and left Genesis alone. It could be a trick to save her from the council but I’m not certain. If I were Genesis I would be so long gone he’d never see me again. It takes a turn and another man comes into the picture. It’s worth the read.

The first few chapters are amazing. There are some smelling errors but that doesn t really bother me. I loved the main character, because she defends herselfs. And she isn't the whiney little girl kind. She knows what she wants and feels powerfull and dangerous. But later on the chapters get confusing. It is like there are some chapters that we missed ore some information that wasn't given to us. I hope when I finish the book I would understand it a bit better.