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The Dark Thrall: Mating Olivia Reviews

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Suzie Sushi

Review after half of the novel

Accro à l'histoire ! j'espère en apprendre plus sur le passé de certains personnages, notamment Michael et les dragons. Après j'en suis même pas à la moitié donc bon, j'ai le temps de voir venir. Et Nick j'ai juste envie de le baffer. J'espère vraiment qu'Olivia va être enfin heureuse et guérie de ses traumas. J'aime bien qu'il soit précisé sur quelle POV on est, ça évite de se perdre et de ne plus savoir où on en est. C'est intéressant de voir la même histoire sous la POV des différents personnages

November 11, 2026
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Monica Roggeman Fonseca

Review after half of the novel

Hot hot hot. The interaction between the 3 off them. How they need each other. I want to feel that claim. That desire. The way story is built up makes me wonder what else to expect. I would love her to try anal. And dp. Wonder about nick. As she is claimed his bond will break. Will she ever let hem near everly? Is she pregnant? What is the baby wolf or dragon. Or a mix? When will jay fuck her en start her training.

November 9, 2026
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Melia Holmes

Review after half of the novel

Always love the shifter universe, and this is a great one. New to the males being invaded with each other as well, but still enjoying it. Interested to see how things turn out with her old mate. And can't wait for baby girl to meet her mama's new mates, hoping that'll be super sweet and heart warming. Love how intensely they want each other and how caring the guys are about her feelings and insecurities, you don't always get that.

November 9, 2026
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Jon

Review after half of the novel

I like the story to intimacy ratio. The fantasy element adds additional intrigue to the story line. The novel keeps you hooked with each chapter and ready to read more. I look forward to seeing how the story proceeds and the characters develop. I look forward to seeing what additional plots come in as the story progresses onward. I am excited to delve more into this world and then finish the novel and check out other works by this author.

November 9, 2026
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Arawyn

Review after half of the novel

Love the characters so much. The passion between the three of them is so captivating. It so amazing that the guys love each other with no jealousy over Olivia. I can't stop reading! I wish I could hear this as an audio book. I am interested on how they will blend their lives together. My only complaint is I wish the "dragon" part was explained better. I didn't realize the two guys were actually dragons. Being in a wolf pack territory, I thought they were a different type of wolf.

November 7, 2026
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MyGiveAFuckFairyDied

Review after half of the novel

I am 40 chapters in and, so far, the novel is really interesting, intriguing, addictive. The premise is different from everything I've read so far: a quadruple consisting in two dragon males, a wolf female and a wolf male. That is definitely not something you encounter often. There's a lot of spice and passion and I love it 🙂 Olivia has suffered so much, she deserves to be loved, cherished and taken care of. She has been so brave, being a single mom is no joke. She deserves to be happy 😊

November 3, 2026

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Review after half of the novel

This story is a unique blend of surprises and mystery keeping you on edge for the next chapter. It's written with passion and thought through to keep one wondering what the next chapter might bring. The author did a fantastic job by keeping the readers satisfied with the mixed emotions and intense feelings of being able to understand the storyline and what it might lead to. I loved every second of reading this story, it puts you in another world.

November 3, 2026
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supernova

Review after half of the novel

It’s very unique and creative I love how it’s almost like refreshing and not too much dream. So yeah 💝💝💝💝❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🥹🥹🥹🥹✨✨✨✨👌👌👌🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭it’s just overall a very nice book and I love how the author does this. Honestly jealous of your creative mind and your patience because I could never have the patience to think all this and make it make sense and not accidentally go off course or lose patience and motivation truly inspirational indeed like omg I aspire to be like you

October 31, 2026
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Mary

Review after half of the novel

Ich finde die Story bis jetzt echt gut. Sie folgt einem roten Faden und ist übersichtlich. Vor allem gefällt mir persönlich das sie so heiß ist und alles ziemlich detailliert beschrieben ist… Die Charaktere sind voll cool. Toll dabei ist, dass man durch die verschiedenen Perspektiven bessere Einblicke und Eindrücke der Gefühlswelt aller drei Protagonisten bekommt. Man kann alle besser kennenlernen und findet langsam mehr über sie heraus obwohl man vor allem bei den zwei Drachen (Killian & Jay) merkt, dass sie noch viel verbergen. Ich bin mir sicher auf die drei kommt noch viel zu… Ich freue mich darauf!

October 29, 2026
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JJ

Review after the novel completion

Chapters are short and expensive. Besides errors in character names, pronouns etc (I.e. when meant to be in Micheal's view, he sees Cami touching Micheal -should be Sid. Or using her/hers when should be him/his. Inconsistency in pet names for Jay, Killian, and Nick -daddy, dad, and papa were mixed. Would have liked to read the Mating Cermony between both sets (Olivias mates and Everlys). Didnt feel like Micheal fully got to unleash his beats or demon. Beautiful story otherwise.

October 26, 2026
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