THE DARK MOON Reviews

The Dark Moon is a very sweet story of a human mated to a strong alpha. It lends a super family and friend tone with humor and love. The Alpha Grayson is over the moon to have found his mate accepting her completely and without any qualms that she is human. Her back story with her mother is also very cute. Her friend, the gay betas mate Cooper also makes way for very funny interactions. Guessing the jeopardy will come from Eli and his sister

Great story. Had a good plot line and character profiles. You can see the growth in some of the characters from the beginning to the end. I am interested the know the other characters story and what happens next. The story hit on different emotions as well. You understand what the characters were going through based on the scenes. This was a great story and a very good read. Would love to see stories on the other characters and how they grew with the pack or after everything occurred.

It keeps a good pace, it keeps you interested and gives you details without making the story feel drawn out and boring. We are getting more into what going on with each relationship and it will be nice to figure out what Eli and Elle are. I also have a feeling the dad that ran off is apart of this but I could be wrong. Overall a good story so far and I am interested in seeing how everything plays out.

The chat was so bad and it didn't go to church last week and it didn't go well for a girl who said she had a good time out of school so she was going dead to be home and I have a great time at the hospital and I'm going home soon so I'll let me get the rest before you get here so we don't get too much of it anymore and you don't want her anymore anymore lol you can I tell

So far this is an ok read. There are a few grammar errors and once in awhile the paragraphs are written twice, but I’ve read some other books where whole chapters are written in twice… so not too bad. The story line is ok, not a lot of drama or action so far which isn’t a bad thing sometimes. I enjoy reading books that aren’t extremely suspense filled throughout the book once in awhile. Wondering if it will get suspenseful now.. we shall see.

I like the book so far. Tho at some point I did stop reading because I was scared of what would happen next. The coins to buy the chapters are expensive but it’s worth it sometimes. I do feel like you should lower the price to buy the chapters since not a lot of people have that much coins sometimes. Overall the book is really good and I do hope you continue to make more chapters of this book.

I like the progression of the story, the writer is giving her time to fully understand things in her time, it's not rushed . I also like the friendship with the betas mate, although the beta himself seems aloof. I love how Grayson lives her but it's a bit excessive with the rage . I know alphas can be hard headed especially when it comes to their Luna but he should try and tone it down. I also want to know the deal with the twins. Please the chapters are too short

This is great, love a slow burn novel. Also, it's refreshing to see a friends to lovers that's not all angst. Sometimes I think some of these authors just write drama for drama's sake. I get there has to be SOME conflict, but some of thse novels take it overboard. This one is great, because just getting to know each other is cute enough. Plus there's still some conflict with the unknown threat. I really hope there is a little bit of spice.

One of the better novels I’ve read on here. Dialogue as always could do with some work but the characters are developing nicely and good mix of personalities. Looking forward to seeing where the story goes and keeping it interesting. Mix of romantic and mystical which works well on here. Need more of Grayson point of view and a little less random violence can be possessive without that element. Hopefully this will be more than one book as will be good to see how the writer matures the relationships.

This was an easy read; cute story that quite honesty made me smile. It was a different tale for me since most of the stories I have read have had the main characters be underdogs (dormant wolves, abused ,etc) but this one portrayed an average human running into the supernatural world and experiencing expected reactions. It had some interesting interactions between the characters and their budding relationships; whether friendship or romance. Will say though . . . I am torn on the fact there is so much love . . . . You have family, platonic friend, romance.. . The love of coffee . . . The torn part is it seems cliche BUT also realistic on what many people want but lack.