The Alpha's Unwanted Mate Reviews

Incomplete, alot of repeating pages. Not very satisfied. There seem to be confusion although it was stated several times that she was his fated mate. When the father debt was paid for her in return, the names were different. There were alot of gaps. It was hard to decipher what was happening. The story did not flow easily. The section with three mates didn't fit. Then to just end it after the triburnal..please understand there was a possible breach and then nothing..smh.

This novel is extremely well written. It goes beyond the typical generative AI drivel and actually draws you into the characters and the plot. Most importantly for me is that the characters are likeable. They don't take idiotic positions and don't draw out conflict unnecessarily by repeating the same flawed behaviors. In fact the only reason this didn't get give stars is because it isn't finished. If it ended here I would be greatly disappointed.