The Alpha's Unwanted Mate Reviews

Although I like the novel, towards the later chapters it started repeating in chapters which was very irritating because of I've already read something and the 2nd half of the same chapter is exactly what I just read, then it becomes irritating and this happened in several chapters. And now that I finally get to the end of the novel, the curse hasn't been broken and left hanging as to what happens next. Like I said, it's a great story and kept my attention but the chapters that repeat halfway through need to be fixed. And we still don't know what Cassandra really is or what it takes to break the curse.

Complicated but captivating. Seb & Cas have got a lot of advetures before them. What is she really ? Where does her mom come from ? How will the pack react to all of this ? This leaves more questions that need to be answered. For sure there will be more complications before everything settles in place, but i would be very interested in continuing this storyline and reading about this couple and their pack. Keep up the good work !

Incomplete, alot of repeating pages. Not very satisfied. There seem to be confusion although it was stated several times that she was his fated mate. When the father debt was paid for her in return, the names were different. There were alot of gaps. It was hard to decipher what was happening. The story did not flow easily. The section with three mates didn't fit. Then to just end it after the triburnal..please understand there was a possible breach and then nothing..smh.

This novel is extremely well written. It goes beyond the typical generative AI drivel and actually draws you into the characters and the plot. Most importantly for me is that the characters are likeable. They don't take idiotic positions and don't draw out conflict unnecessarily by repeating the same flawed behaviors. In fact the only reason this didn't get give stars is because it isn't finished. If it ended here I would be greatly disappointed.