The Alpha's Substitute Virgin Bride Reviews

I enjoy reading this book but some of it just doesn't make sense. It makes me wonder if the the writer speaks another language. Still the writer is doing a good job. The story is not as bad to where you can not assume what the writer meant to actually say. A few questions and comments I have is what happened to Calista biological mother, does Greyson not trust Cali, why would he hire a PI after getting married

Overall, I really enjoyed the story. The plot line was good, the twists & turns were fun to read. That was why I continued to read this story. I rated the story with a 2, due to the poor understanding of correct grammar, the English language & characters in this story were largely 2 dimensional. There was no real depth to them. No critical thinking to figure out when something was a bald faced lie. The characters would flip between different extreme emotions. They were largely happy, sad, angry, bitter or scared. This book could have been so much better.

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Wonderful book, you feel like you are there, Best book to share with friends and family. Its sad that so far Calista has not yet find happiness but always struggling even when she felt like life is starting to be better. Her husband is the most amazing and living soul that has scars on him that are not easy to heal because of the wife she lost in the hands of calister father. But as we all know love conquers all. Calister will win him back

A difficult book to read. I assume that English is not the authors first language. There are a lot of typos, names mixed up, grammar errors etc throughout the book. At points it was difficult to understand. The story was full of twists which was fine. I found later in the book, once the heroine had found her voice and got her confidence back, it was more enjoyable to read. She then returned to the abuse and returned to being meek. It would have been nice to see more character growth. The story mentions Alpha and that the heroine is half werewolf. No other references to werewolves were mentioned ie marks, wolves, bonds, stronger physically, etc. It would have been nice to see more of that as it is tagged as a werewolf book. A nice read, you may need to read pages a few times to understand though. A lot of repetition and over explaining.

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lam very disappointed with this novel, the grammar is bad, the story line is terrible. its like a toddler telling you a story . The beginning of the story was alright not that bad. the middle part is just ridiculous l am sorry couldn’t finish the book it’s just waste of my time and money for repetitive story chapter after chapter. l understand trying to tell the two sides of a story but dang this is bad very sad.

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Great novel. The story kept you wanting more. The writing was a bit misunderstood as the words, at times, did not fit in place and there were quit a few places this happened throughout the novel. Was wondering if it was edited before it was released. I was really glad that Bella and Grays twin brother were arrested. The story was thoroughly thought out. I would have liked to see more of an ending as it was really short. More about the third child, triplets?

This story starts out sooo strong… but then something happens around chapter 20 that I was not expecting. Now I’m left with a terrible feeling that sticks with me, even when I’m not reading this story. The grammar issues also kicked in hard right around that time. I’m sticking with this story because I believe it will have a happy ending. But honestly I’m not sure how much more of the grammar issues I can take.