The Alpha's Slave Reviews

Loving the book so far needs more sex but I am liking what I'm reading thank you for writing these stories they are amazing and good and fun please keep it up You're doing an excellent job I can't wait for more to the story cuz it is definitely one of my favorite genres BDSM is amazing as well thank you very much for writing this novel and I am looking forward to more to this novel and others as I said

It was an okay book I mean not so much good but only because I felt that it was to much hard story especially the master who was so much cruel and I hate it and Madison has gone through way too much. It was a good ending but there was some things that they still didn’t found out most of the things that happened and that Madison did not do anything and how Xavier end up with tara

I really liked this book. The story was fast paced. It was not drawn out but always had action happening. It does feel the ending could have been a little longer, but it did close up most loose ends for most characters. Somethings that did bother me was that the chapters were short, which is hard to justify with spending coins. Also twice chapters are repeated and one not in the correct order. I would recommend this book to people that what something that will keep their attention.

The book is okay, it's taking long to get to the main plot, I'm hoping there's a nice twist in the story. The Master seems to have a soft spot for Madison, I wonder how their relationship will change over time and if she'll be able to impact Zara. It would be nice to have a background story on Zara as well. The writing approach and spelling errors could be improved. Overall it has potential to become a really great novel, I just hope the Author reviews the book and amends it.

The base line of the book is ok. There are a lot of errors in the book. It seems like a child almost wrote it with how some of the characters act. Sometimes the book is all over the place and you have to reread it to make it make sense. Keep writing though. The more you write the better you will get. I do however like how I know who is talking in what chapter. Keep up the good work

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It was ok seemed rushed and I wish there was more parts with his feelings but that’s just me and also it was kinda annoying how weak Maddison was and ik his kid is disabled but sweet Mady was extremely annoying to read every single time and why didn’t he kick emery and Bianca out to begin with they did nothing anyways nd Bianca was just in the way trying to get stone and couldn’t but hey

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I love the characters and the way they all interact the plot is good as well as the spice I love how Mona and Madison are best friends and that emery is the perfect enemy of the story I have not finished the novel yet but I love the way everything is written and the way the characters express themselves, it's easy to tell who is speaking, as well as the actions (and positions), the only thing I sometimes see is the misspelled words overall this novel is great and I look forward to reading more!

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