The Alpha Prince's Abused Mate Reviews

I enjoyed this thoroughly tight up until the ending. You literally left the story unfinished. Alana and William have so much unfinished business I am desperate to read what happens next please finish your story and to the creator of alpha novel app for the life of God stop letting the authors publish stories that are either completely unfinished, or missing huge chunks of information where chapters are just randomly gone. It is so frustrating reading an entire story without knowing the ending

I like the story so far. I find myself wanting to edit some of the spelling and places where it says he when talking about Alana. And it bothered me when prince William was calling his father "Daddy" I am wondering if it was the alpha king that sent the assassin after them or if it was Belinda. I like that Alana is confronting her family. I hope that she will find more confidence in herself, and I wish that William would be man enough to tell them that Alana is his mate, it bothers me that he says he wants to but every time he has had the opportunity he doesn't do it.

OMG I loved every bit of this story except for the part about the abuse Alana experienced before William found her. They went through some tough times but in the end it was worth it for the both of them. They truly are a wonderful couple. I'm so happy that they were able to live their happily ever after. I just wished that the story didn't end so soon I wanted to know how many children they were going to have and whether or not the were going to look more like Alana or William or a mixture of both

The story started out ok. Grammar was decent for the most part but has started getting very sloppy at this point in the story. I hope they get Alana the proper education for basic understanding of life and life skills that she is so obviously lacking. However, if the story line doesn’t start to progress soon I doubt I will continue reading much further. I will continue for now and see how it all goes. It has potential to be a good story.

It was a great book, though, we did have a lot of pronoun.Error corrections.He instead of she or her, instead of him riddled throughout the entire book, some editing does need to be done.But the storyline moved along quite nicely.It would have nice to have had a little bit more information about atlanta's parents.And what they went through as well towards the end, whatever happened with the book in the journal, did it just disappear with francine?Or was it to be found?Somewhere else at a later time I would have liked to have also seen children

This is a beautiful story with the ups and downs from 2 wolves. Who love each other more than anyone. A very special book about how they’ve found each other and how they work with each other it was very inspiring to see them grow into each other and the way that they do fight together to make the other happy and healthy and wholesome. I’m sure you’ll have too find the next book from this series

I loved this story. The ending was the best of all the Alpha stories I have read so far. It was short and not two many twist and turns to make it long. I really loved the ending when Francine brought William back to life. I was getting disappointed there for a minuted until she explain to Aiana that he was not realky dead abd that she was the watcher of the Werewolf souls or life ,whatever it was called, I just knew it was a great book. Would love to read more like this one. Not to long and I hated to put it down until it was finish.

Love it!! .

Interesting story but the grammer could definitely be improved. I wish William would just tell his parents if no one else so they would stop trying to set him up with anyone. I am glad to see Alana getting braver, she deserves some happiness. I hope her family doesn't hurt her we shall see what will happen while she is there, thank goodness she has people with her looking out for her, because she never would have been able to do what she is without them by her side as well.

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