Tempting My Offish Mates Reviews

A very engaging story. If this much has happened so far, I can't wait to see the rest. A lot happened in a short time; it wasn't spread out over dozens of chapters (thankfully). Rain is a likeable, energetic person, full of initiative. I'm very glad there aren't any bland characters here. I hope the author has a few more interesting ideas for the novel's plot. It's really hard to get bored of reading. Good job, and I'll keep reading. I recommend it.

It was good but the ending was kinda lame. Needs to be more fleshed out with all the mates instead of switching the focus to just the one in the end. The pacing was good in the beginning, but as it reached the climax and ending it just seemed rushed. Needs to be proofread and the censorship throughout is a bit annoying. All in all, it's a decent read and has a lot of potential given the world building that's created. However, it could use more fleshing out in the last quarter of the book.

I was liking the story untill she got matched with Nate. It is so unfair for the other 2 mates. She was not spending time with them at all after that. She seemed to be very selfish after she mated with Nate. It would have been better if she was pregnant with triplets and got them all an heir. And she talked about not quitting school but after mating with Nate I did not read nothing more about classes. It was not what I expected.

Liking it so far. I wonder who the other mates are. Maybe there aren’t any? It’s an interesting title but doesn’t seem to match the story yet. However, don’t let that stop you, it is a good story and I’m interested to see what happens between the characters as the story progresses. I’m glad there’s a friendship element as well as the romance. Makes the characters feel more well rounded. The model of paying per chapter is not great. Especially since the chapters are so short.

Definitely worth reading but could use a little bit more background story and maybe some more character development for the main character such as who her mother is and why her father died and how she originally came to know about her heritage as a wolf. It also completely leaves out the reason why the antagonist leaves her in the first place It gives just enough detail and depth to make it a readable story but not enough to make it a great story.

I do not trust Evandrus even a little bit. I think that's why her father left when he was 20. I also think that is why he never told Rain about them. He probably never wanted Evandrus to know about his daughter. I wonder what is going to happen with Luke now. Is he really going to get away with everything that he has done? Charles father seems to be a real piece of work. So far a good story

Well Well Well I guess its tym for me to leave a review on the novel now. I'm not yet done with the novel now I'm only half way through it and so far so good. I'm only wondering who is going to be the third mate in the group although I hope it should the dragon it would be fun. Anyway shout out to the author of this novel you did a great on this one, thumbs up, good.

What I have read so far has been really interesting & hasn't let me put the book down wondering what is going to happen next. I love the fact that there are so many different creatures like wolves, vampires, dragons, elves & fairies that I know of so far. It will be interesting to see if there are branch offs of the said variety of creatures in their own story lines? I love a good fantasy story with a great story

I am still making my mind up. There are parts of this story that I really enjoy. But then I got to another section and I gate the style of writing. I also confused around the title do they have more mates so far I can only see once connection so if they have another mate. You better introduce another mate soon if that is the way she wants to do it. Just make them powerful with and melt them have some fun.

It is very interesting so far! A little bit confusing, but I am sure her new abilities will be shown soon. She and her Mate are great together. If I were Star don’t think I would want to be with my Childhood boyfriend and watch him with his Mate? But have enjoyed reading it. Interesting slant of the diseases a Werewolf could get! In any other stories a Vampires bite was not toxic to Werewolf’s! Very strange, but new slant on it.