Second Chance Fated Reviews

Loved it, I hope there is more and it has suspense and action and lots of romance...I there's more on Oakleys father and new romance with the pack doctor and more stories on Oakley having babies and the battle against the rogues and vampires...and more on Sam and Rebecca and on senerity..if she goin to continue to cause trouble and lure Oakley to the Vampires and how will Oakley stop them from stealing her powers and stopping them.

I liked the novel. I do have some questions which are no means to be critical, right or wrong. There is a question I have about the writing style. To me it seems unnecessary to go into detail about normal tasks... gong to the bathroom, getting dressed, etc. I don't understand the need for such detail but on the other hand, I know nothing about writing a book , & the process a writer goes through to formulate a book.

Fun story about overcoming challenges to find love. Allie had a hard time of it and Reece helped once he figured out to cool his excitement more and let her lead the way. It stopped a bit abruptly since I was starting to enjoy how well things were going. Reece needed to understand how Allie was struggling and to let her set the pace of how quickly they were to become a couple. Marking her so quickly was a mistake, but glad to see they got over that.

Love this novel cannot wait wait for more chapters. I hope karma finds it way to serenity. The new characters and second chances happening are wonderful. Gives everyone hope. Love is never dead or defined by one thing or one person. I'm thinking Oakley is pregnant. At least hoping. Mark definitely will have to step up and take serenity out of the Picture because if he does he will have more trouble then he can handle. I don't want Oakley having to kill her.

So I really like the book. I'm thoroughly confused as to why it needed mid sentence pretty much. The errors in spelling and lack of finishing words leave me to believe there wasn't anyone able to edit this for the author. I really hope the next one has been gone over by a friend or the author themselves so that we can get a better picture of what's going on throughout the book. Other than those critiques I really like the character development!

This was an ausome book . It needs to continue you left some things not answered. The characters were great . I felt like I was in the story with them. But I am wanting more. It's a really awesome read the characters are fabulous and the story is very sweet. I enjoy reading I love a good happy ending , you are so close but you need to answer a few questions so me and the other readers can get the ending the bstory deserves.

It was excellent but the ending was too abrupt and left too much information hanging with no resolution! I hope this is not the end as I would love to see it finish out. You set up the dream meeting with the moon goddess and her prediction and then never addressed it again! Not fair. Please finish this out and show us what kind of powerful leader, Oakley really is! Plus, he father just got his second chance mate and that needs to be addressed also!

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The story was good, but unfinished. I have no idea who her father's mate is. I also don't know how the coming war unfolds and is resolved. Do they have children? Who is the vampire causing all this trouble? Does Serenity have anything to do with the rogues? What happens to the young rogue Sam? There are far too many questions left unanswered. I have to assume that there is another book in the works. Please make that happen.

Its been a good novel so far. But I am waiting for more chapters. It stopped at chapter 44. But clearly there should be more chapters. I am really liking the main characters, also the main side characters; lunas dad, alphas parents, his beta and lunas friend. And of course, loving their wolves. Not sure why the review has to have a minimum word count. I don't know what else to say without having the rest of book completed.