Second Chance Fated Reviews

So I really like the book. I'm thoroughly confused as to why it needed mid sentence pretty much. The errors in spelling and lack of finishing words leave me to believe there wasn't anyone able to edit this for the author. I really hope the next one has been gone over by a friend or the author themselves so that we can get a better picture of what's going on throughout the book. Other than those critiques I really like the character development!

This was an ausome book . It needs to continue you left some things not answered. The characters were great . I felt like I was in the story with them. But I am wanting more. It's a really awesome read the characters are fabulous and the story is very sweet. I enjoy reading I love a good happy ending , you are so close but you need to answer a few questions so me and the other readers can get the ending the bstory deserves.

It was excellent but the ending was too abrupt and left too much information hanging with no resolution! I hope this is not the end as I would love to see it finish out. You set up the dream meeting with the moon goddess and her prediction and then never addressed it again! Not fair. Please finish this out and show us what kind of powerful leader, Oakley really is! Plus, he father just got his second chance mate and that needs to be addressed also!

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The story was good, but unfinished. I have no idea who her father's mate is. I also don't know how the coming war unfolds and is resolved. Do they have children? Who is the vampire causing all this trouble? Does Serenity have anything to do with the rogues? What happens to the young rogue Sam? There are far too many questions left unanswered. I have to assume that there is another book in the works. Please make that happen.

Its been a good novel so far. But I am waiting for more chapters. It stopped at chapter 44. But clearly there should be more chapters. I am really liking the main characters, also the main side characters; lunas dad, alphas parents, his beta and lunas friend. And of course, loving their wolves. Not sure why the review has to have a minimum word count. I don't know what else to say without having the rest of book completed.

I enjoyed it very much. I hope that was not the ending. Can't wait to read more or book 2. Good great Good great Good great Good great much. I hope that was not the ending. Can't wait to read more or book 2. Good great Good great Good great Good great much. I hope that was not the ending. Can't wait to read more or book 2. Good great Good great Good great Good great much. I hope that was not the ending. Can't wait to read more or book 2. Good great Good great Good great Good great

This an intensely told story with everyone views on it. What will Oakley do to protect the pack and the people she lives the most. No wonder anyone under 18 couldn't read this because of all the sexual tensions going on in the story. Take my advice if the first man doesn't know how to please you right go for another man that will because that's what Oakley found in Mark. For someone to have missionary style sex is stupid and please their partner even worse. I hope everything ends in happiness.

My impression of this book..... It's a cliff hanger. There are a lot of loose ends that leads up to the end of this book. There needs to be a second part or just continue this book to the end. It was really a great read. Very attentive and attention grabbing. The twist and turns had me hooked and eager for the next chapter. No matter what you decide to do please remember to not keep fans waiting for the rest of this story.

At first I wasn't too sure about this story. As I went on reading it began to catch my interest more and more. Although there are some typos the story is pretty good. I very read other novels regarding bullied mates. This is another with different outcomes leading to the bully being accepted as the mate. I'm glad they worked out their issues and also that it appears her father smelt his second chance mate. I just didn't care for the way it ended.