Revenge in Hundredfold and an Alpha Commander Reviews

It was a. Good story. The writer did extremely well with the plot line. I understand the need for the sex but I get tired of the gratuitous never ending details of every encounter. The plot line was great the characters were fairly well developed it just felt like the sexual encounters were forced and placed continuously throughout as filler to make longer story. I believe that the story with less explicit content and more plot development would have made it an even more compelling read. This was comparatively a better story than others I have read

Intrigue, violence, sexual tension, betrayal, revenge, torn family bonds are just some of the exciting and perplexed moments that happen in this novel. It’s hard to put down and is a diffinent page turner. Love this novel and any alpha loving reader will too. The chapters are decent priced and the length is better than most. Multiple characters and versatile attitudes blends well in this novel. A bit more layout on the area where the villages are mentioned would add more depth, but it doesn’t hurt the story line.

Good read though I would have liked to know if buck found out frosting secret. Did Ardon go back to the pack and take rewrite new laws and make lives better for the gammas i liked how the heroine fought the royal traditions and exposed all the lies and intrigued of not only the palace but her family. I found it unusual that crystals could magically show if the pregnancy where of royal blood or not. All in all a good read

Ohh what a story it is wel written and a lot of different characters and the more you get to know them there is no real bad guys they are all victims of surcomstance i only find it weird that Bettoni a gamma is and not a Omega love to read the whole story to find out how it will end pretty sure there will be a spectacle and i hope everybody get the live they decurve bye how to go read

I really enjoyed this book. It showed that it is the quiet ones you really have to watch out for. It showed that being rich doesn't mean you are happy. Bettoni was a lowly Gamma that was beaten because royal blood liked her and that was not permitted. Zachary was royal blood and was tired of his Alpha brother setting him up with royal women. Zachary rebelled and grabbed Bettoni from the back of the royal house and presented her to his Alpha brother as his new wife. This brought out all of the royal hypocrites and their nasty ways to break up Zachary and Bettoni. It showed how greed really was evil. It showed how silent determination, being observant, loving your mate, and trusting in one's self to survive can result in coming out on top.