Rejected While Pregnant: Claimed by the Direwolf Alpha Reviews

I am not sure if the author is forgetting what they are writing, but the story keeps changing and things that have already happened repeat out of nowhere. The last five chapters were the same thing over and over. There needs to be some better proofreading or editing with how much money we spend to unlock each chapter. It reads like a five-year-old wrote it and the plot needs to move on a bit. Maybe it was written by AI

Very interesting story line. All the different bloodlines coming together after three centuries of fighting was very interesting and fascinating. The story of each bloodline was quite complete and lent a realism to the whole story. Lucian and Lori’s relationship was so well written and became part of the entire journey to a better world. Enjoyed reading it although I think the price is almost as much as a normal book. I will be reading more of these books.

I like the potential this story has, but it's either written by AI or the author is not aware of their own storyline. It introduced information multiple times as if it's the first time the characters are learning that information. How many times is Roman and his sisters going to learn she's pregnant and who the baby daddy is? Also, it repeats the characters experience as if they didn't just have that experience. Why? Dragging this out through these repeats and introducing facts as if they were never known is doing damage to a good story idea. I'm on the verge of abandoning the story if this keeps up.

The novel is quite enjoyable. Some chapters are out of order though, which makes reading through frustrating at times. It breaks up the flow and has you second guessing what you previously read until you see the comments are the same as your thoughts. Some simple editing and moving chapters around will fix this, but the author doesn’t seem to care anymore. For the most part the writing is good and the story line is different from most out there already.

Loving this novel. Feel for our girl as she has grown up feeling that she is not good enough no matter what she does, I hope her step sister and family suffer for what they did to her and how they turned their backs on her just for greed her dad should be held accountable for his actions for not believing his first born when she needed him the most, i hope she finds love with our dire alpha and that they kick ass when they need to

It was such a good read and I def would read it again bc it was just that good . Was dragged out a bit but over all so worth the read. It’s def a book to read when you have time nd are able to enjoy it . Would recommend it . Chapters are short though it was not the best length wise but yes the content of the book. Author did a great job with the writing! 10 / 10 ! Y

The story was good just had some inconsistencies due to lack of proof reading or attention to details could have a little better but all in all it was a good story would have like a little less repetiveness and more on the vampire treaties to come. The small sentence at the end of each chapter was a bit excessive as there really was no need to recap on the chapters. I would like to see another book but definitely less recap, more story and most definitely some proofreading.

She already shifted Why is the author confused? Her silver eyes the same And something it is not clear from the beginning: Why an Alfa will chose a wolf less instead of the sister even the author said she was sold. I hope it will be explained later He main story is indeed interesting but I found things that has to be polished All in all, I keep reading because it hooks me, I really want to know how everything develops

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A strange and different story, and at times very confusing to read. There are some good moments, but overall it is more confusing than it is good. I think the author should go through it again, as there are parts that don’t fit together and don’t make any sense at all. I don’t know if I just didn’t understand it, but for me personally it felt like a waste of coins to read, which is why I’m giving it a neutral evaluation. As mentioned, it still has some good moments, but it probably needs to be understood in a different way than I do.