Rejected While Pregnant: Claimed by the Direwolf Alpha Reviews

I am not sure if the author is forgetting what they are writing, but the story keeps changing and things that have already happened repeat out of nowhere. The last five chapters were the same thing over and over. There needs to be some better proofreading or editing with how much money we spend to unlock each chapter. It reads like a five-year-old wrote it and the plot needs to move on a bit. Maybe it was written by AI

I am enjoying the story line. It appears some of the chapters are mixed up. In one the FMC has found her wolf and then several chapters later she hasn't. It is almost like the author started on one story line and then abandoned it and went a different route. The whole story needs a good editor. Again I love the story, just needs tuning. I hope Jasper dies goes to hell where he has to continuously watch his rejected mate and child happiness.

The story initially grabbed my attention with an intriguing premise and well-developed characters, but now it seems to be progressing at a much slower pace than I expected. I find myself eagerly turning the pages, waiting chapter by chapter to see when the plot will finally pick up momentum. I really hope the narrative shifts soon because I don't want to continue reading through repetitive elements without significant developments. The anticipation is growing, and I hope it leads to some exciting twists in the near future.

This novel was excellent. Even with the few continuity errors I noticed. The story moves forward easily and pulls you in. The tension at times is fe lt through the well worded verses. It would be interesting to have a sequel for the hybrid's story or reign and growth, unifying vampire, werewolf and direwolf. Also a parallel story of Loir prior to meeting Lucian, to see the road that shaped him also. A prequel of the lead up to the Vampire-Werewolf War would also de interesting.

I feel like this was a good time to end the story. I enjoyed the book and recommend it to anyone who is interested in reading it. It was a good read for the story. There were parts that I really wish had better explained the story more thoroughly but it wasn’t meant to be. Still I enjoyed reading it and would recommend it to others who have been watching and reading the story. Thanks for sharing it with me.

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Very interesting story line. All the different bloodlines coming together after three centuries of fighting was very interesting and fascinating. The story of each bloodline was quite complete and lent a realism to the whole story. Lucian and Lori’s relationship was so well written and became part of the entire journey to a better world. Enjoyed reading it although I think the price is almost as much as a normal book. I will be reading more of these books.

I like the potential this story has, but it's either written by AI or the author is not aware of their own storyline. It introduced information multiple times as if it's the first time the characters are learning that information. How many times is Roman and his sisters going to learn she's pregnant and who the baby daddy is? Also, it repeats the characters experience as if they didn't just have that experience. Why? Dragging this out through these repeats and introducing facts as if they were never known is doing damage to a good story idea. I'm on the verge of abandoning the story if this keeps up.

The novel is quite enjoyable. Some chapters are out of order though, which makes reading through frustrating at times. It breaks up the flow and has you second guessing what you previously read until you see the comments are the same as your thoughts. Some simple editing and moving chapters around will fix this, but the author doesn’t seem to care anymore. For the most part the writing is good and the story line is different from most out there already.

Loving this novel. Feel for our girl as she has grown up feeling that she is not good enough no matter what she does, I hope her step sister and family suffer for what they did to her and how they turned their backs on her just for greed her dad should be held accountable for his actions for not believing his first born when she needed him the most, i hope she finds love with our dire alpha and that they kick ass when they need to