Rejected: Curse of the Alpha Reviews

This is a amazing book I love how she is trying to move on for her kids but the daddy of her kids won't let her even tho he has a wife to be soon but she is horrible and has a bunch of lies that baby she is carrying ain't his I hope he finds out I just want Derick and Kara to be happy but the daddy won't allow that he will end them just to have her

Now this is the best book and as far I been reading them I also get how the husband got drunk and how you have sex with her best friend then she finds love and y’all still coming after her even though she has the cursed. She has mix feeling about both guys one gives her fire the other gives her safety so she stuck on who to trust and who to love. But the ex-husband is really doing too much

This book is so good. I got hook right away. I just can not believe what happened from the start to now. I can not put my phone down. I am flying through chapters just to know what is going to happened next. My husband says I have a problem lol because I am so hooked lol. I told him he should start reading it too or have me read it out loud to him. And then we can be hooked together

The book drags on and repeats the desires of the FMC over and over. It’s annoying and wish they can move forward and not repeat their feelings at every turn. Other than that, the book is worth reading and I enjoy finding out what happens in the next chapters. Hopefully the main FMC lets go and finds true happiness with the one she is mean to be with. Even the Male main character gets long winded and doesn’t know what to do.

Characters are well thought out, Names keep getting mixed up Kara/ Sara, Locations LA/ Seattle; can make it a bit confusing. Maybe re read before publishing the next chapter? Some scenes skip too far ahead and don’t tie into the last one , can again make it extremely confusing. I love the descriptions of things not over wordy , just enough to give you a feel. The passion in the Characters emotions is great lots of excitement and you always understand where they are coming from. Keep the story going.