PRETENDER: Alpha's Forbidden Omega Reviews

This novel is so good. I love the plot of the book. My favourite character Baron and I cannot wait when he discovered that Elyan is a girl. Especially with all this wicked treatment he is doing to her. I like Mia the witch character as well, the love she has for Elyan and the effort she went through to hide Elyan shows she is a true friend. I feel sorry for Elyans mum, in the way her husband is treating her.

Such a unique plot. The characters are growing on me, Aspen in particular. The only flaws are a few slipped pronouns and some verb tenses being out of place, but that's a just little polish. I'm super curious what Elowyn's real secret is, why this guy Haspan is so eager to get ahold of her. I'd like to see more of Riven Thorny as well, he seems quite intriguing. All in all a very pleasurable read, can't wait to see how it ends up!