One Night with My Ex's Alpha Brother Reviews

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Loved the story line. Kept me on my toes. So much action, violence and love between the alpha and Luna. They kept each other on their toes, kept each other safe for each other enemies. They were really meant for each other. Alpha !always knew hen his luna was in danger and luna was a magnet for trouble. I didn't like Kade at all. Don't get me wrong, he played his part evil as hell and played it well. Thank you for this novel and can't wait for your next novel.

I love it! I like the storyline very much. The story has everything I like to read; romance, fantasy, love and excitement. But maybe an editor could correct the English language, because sometimes it is hard to follow the line through the story. It is also hard to keep track of characters names. Beacause sometimes the name changes for the same character, and so does the gender of some of the characters. None the less, I sure liked reading the story.

Читать легко. Многие сюжетные линии просчитываются заранее, так что подходит для снятия стресса. Тем не менее, написано легко и интересно на английском, в переводе не читала. Не покидает ощущение, что я смотрела фильм с таким же сюжетом. Главная героиня представлена сильной и независимой женщиной, бесстрашной и иногда импульсивной. В то же время совсем не проницательной. Очевидные вещи ею осознанно игнорируются, интуиция работает через раз. Порой ей сложно сложить 2+2 и сделать вывод, а в другой раз она с лёгкостью раскрывает подставу.

This book took me by surprise, it’s not the normal love story that I go for, the main character is strong and I love how Rowan watches her be strong and is there to protect her, not to get in the way. He elevates her in ways seen and unseen! Can’t wait to see when she actually admits that she loves him, because I see him loving her already! I recommend this book, it a great read so far!

Libra and Kade may be fated mates. Kade thinks he is smart wanting to play Liora, not realising he is playing himself and had just lost someone valuable. I think Kade’s loose will be Rowan’s gain. He likes Liora, he is a better suitor than two faced Kade and Selene. I is good Selene’s plot was caught on camera and she has no clue Liora is the Quinn heiress. She would be more humiliated when both Selene and Kade realise.

I really liked the story. The characters made sense and you could easily feel the characters and their personalities. I loved that Liora and Rowan ended up together and I was cheering Rowan on to hoped win Liora’s heart the entire time. However, what made the story a 7 or 8 for me, was there were a lot of inconsistencies, spelling errors, and grammatical mistakes that take you out of the story. Fix those and it would be a 10.

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The storyline is pretty good however there is quite a bit of spelling issues as well as I see issues where you flip back and forth between gender where at one point you talk about her and then the next time you refer to that person it becomes a him so doesn't jive quite a bit. So it could have used some editorial work before you posted it but that's the case with a lot of these stories on this website application and I said that about multiple stories on here yours is in this bad as many of the others though that I had found which is a good thing.

Honestly. The story is not bad even clearly showing written by AI. So much grammar mistakes, name changed, he / she, missing chapter story, it's confusing, sex scene horrendous. Scene mismatched when talked from one person, and after same scene from other. Could be better if written by real person who can put emotion, and grammar before publishing story. Lots of repetitive chapters. If to correct everything it's actually would be nice story to read. Hmm hmmm hmm hmmm hmmm