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Mystery of Fate: Luna Della's Second Chance Reviews

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Ashlyn

Review after the novel completion

I would not recommend reading this book/novel. It has numerous chapters that are repeated. Example Chapter 10 and 11 are the same. No refund on coins................................ Also the book is not finished. Story is unfinished. Paid all those coins and no ending to make sense. Very disappointing in this book. I hope you find another book to read instead.... ... .... .. .. .... ... . .... .... ... .. .. .. ... ... ....... ...... ..... .... .... ... .... ...... ..... ...

May 12, 2024
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Sam

Review after half of the novel

Ok I really do like the story but I feel like if he want his mate back he should of went against the world for his mate cuz his mate is going to have his back no matter what and I feel how she want to let him in but she is so scared of being hurt and her alpha is going to take her son away from her because the pack want except her but I think they will if he stands up for her and he the alpha nobody can't challenge him if they want a death wish .. but the son also have a connection with his father and what will she do when his wolf come out and he Dave find out about his father he going to be mad at his mother for not telling him the truth.. but truth be told y'all making her go through so much stuff just for her to be happy I think she need to be surrounded by the people who going to love her and protect her because Dave can't do it alone let her get her alpha back ................. And cuz she need to be happy cuz this book make me made cuz it's seem like every time she gets happy some body fuck up and about that lil stank mouth he needs to put her and his mother in they place cuz I feel like they don't want the best for him they just don't want his mate to be with him because of the arrangements they had already made I just feel like they is just doing a little to much for right now and it's crazy cuz your mother is always supposed to have ur back unless u is wrong but he is not

May 6, 2024
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AshY

Review after half of the novel

My review is only based on the amount of chapters I have read which is only about 30ish. But from what I've read it's a meh for me. I don't understand why she hasn't told her ex that she is a princess and honestly she should leave him he's a possessive pos and she can do better. I'm wondering if the author is doing this on purpose like a slow burn get you kind of frustrated at the characters but you can't stop reading because you need to know what happens next

May 5, 2024
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Carolyn Mcfarland

Review after the novel completion

I think she should give Albert a chance I wonder if he is her actual dated mate and will she give up on her marriage for a better life I believe Albert would raise her baby as if it was his own and she could have the life she deserves free of all the pain without the omega secret status who could her fated mate actually be what does her brother have in store to prove her husband's love is he bringing his fated mate back in the picture to see who he truly will chose

May 4, 2024
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Angy

Review after the novel completion

You as the author have taken me on an absolute rollercoaster adventure whilst reading this novel! A well thought out, beautifully written story about love, betrayal & pain... where love and hate collides. Della is one of the best advanced characters I've encounterd as of yet. I truly admire how you took this broken & lost, yet powerfull princess and made her whole with integrity and self-love, but also with endless selflesness. I look forword to seeing how the rest of her story unfolds....

May 4, 2024
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Oralia R Guajardo

Review after half of the novel

Right now as I started reading the book , I'm in suspense of what is going to happen nexts , I like what I have already readed , don't know what to expect next , I will continue to read till the end, just wish Della will figure out that he chooses his fate mate no matter what he feels , it's an observation that he has with her , it's not love he feels it's is controll over her , he want her to be the only one while he takes another , that is so wrong.

April 26, 2024
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Becky

Review after half of the novel

This book has an interesting story line so I started reading it. It started pretty good with the lead female character being strong and leaving a cheating mate and abusive family, but then it went a little down hill. The lead female character is supposed to be the daughter of the Lycan King but the author made her weak and also a woman that keeps going back for more abuse. The last chapter I read has the potential to start this story going in the right direction so I will continue to read.

April 24, 2024
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breannah

Review after half of the novel

Della, oh good grief Della. I understand how love can make people do crazy things but for goodness sakes woman you got out of that relationship! Sign the dang divorce papers than mail them off to him. Stay away from that psycho no matter how much it hurts. Also why hasn’t she revealed who she is??? Hiding that and making Kylian think she is sleeping with her brother (gross) is only making him crazier! She needs to use that princess authority

April 24, 2024
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Nonnie

Review after half of the novel

The story is interesting and seems to be pretty well written. The cost is too high. That is all I have to say, I just can't post until a certain number of words is written. THE END

April 23, 2024
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Iris

Review after the novel completion

I really like this one I have is a good time to watching the game with love 😘 a very good time to call you in a bit I have is a very interesting to see how many of them are so cute I really like the idea 💡💡💡 a very good day off and fun 😊😊 the novel a eve read itb the game with love end up early and I will be there at like it is a little bit I have to watching the news 📰

April 22, 2024
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