My Marked Luna Reviews

Nice book to read. From the beginning you understand that the heroine is living a life of hardness and isolation in her own family and pack. Yet she shows resilience and do not allows her bad circumstances to put her down and decide to move on, even after being rejected by her mate. While she is discovering about herself, she is also discovering a life that she had never expected to be her and embrasse her second chance mate. Enjoy!

Story started out great. Read it straight through. Then, a shift happened. She becomes reckless, running away, lying, too trusting. HUGE disparity between book 1 & 2. Abrupt main character death, then story jumps 4 years for book 2 where character is written as a juvenile, snobby, non-shifter. Writing from book 1 is way different in book 2. Almost like 2 different authors. Many old & new characters & situations never resolved. Just gone. Book 2 very short & disjointed with misspellings & continuity errors. Characters age inconsistently. In conclusion, original story great until 2 chapters from end. Thereafter, rushed, disjointed, and confusing.

As usual it’s such a wonderful journey reading your stories! From the way you plant the seed and watch it grow! I truly look forward to MORE of these journeys you create. Bless it be..,How do your creation come to you and the marvelous way you tell the story, you must have come from a LONG line of storytellers! I appreciate your gift! Looking forward to more( hopefully) Thanks again, darn this thing won’t let me end.., I can’t come up with 300 words, it say 80 minimal.., think I may have it 😆 THANKS AGAIN FOR YOUR GIFT OF STORY TELLING♥️💖🌟🌟🌟……………….. Nope still won’t let me leave.., I’m to old to have the patience to satisfy this forum, but I really would like for you to enjoy doing what you do, so I can enjoy READING your FABULOUS stories 😳I’m at 146 and it still won’t let me end.., I don’t want to lose this opportunity to let you know my appreciation in your story. I don’t know if I CAN DO 176 more words just so you will receive this note( now 195 words) I feel like a failure cause this app isn’t letting me get this to you. So forgive me but I’m gonna go CRAZY and put gimerage( know it’s misspelled but hey at 232 😆) With the way MY luck runs YOU probably won’t even see this, WELL, I hope it give Someone a good laugh, cause I’m frustrated with this technology, it hurts my brain to get through this ….🫩🫩🫩🫩🫩🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯😵‍💫😵‍💫😵‍💫😵‍💫😵‍💫🫣🫣🫣🫣🫣😵‍💫😵‍💫😵‍💫😵‍💫😵‍💫😳😳😳😳🫩🫩🫩🫩🫩well that didn’t even count, so I’m having to keep typing and pray I can get this to you( or staff) and give SOMEONE a good laugh.!! Bye

Loved, loved, loved the book from start to end except for when I thought Apphia was gone for good and poor Nick wouldn’t have the love of his life anymore but the twist to that was so unexpected and great! I was super excited to hear she was back inside someone’s body especially when they knew of a way for her to escape and I also love that it could be a true story with the fact of how she was treated so poorly and then fell in love with this rich amazing man with an amazing family and they treated her so well which she deserved so much!! Great read!!!

I like the novel I can stay in line with the narrative. I can follow along with where I think the store is going. Proofreading your work is alway a must. Several grammar errors but the concept is solid. I love the open dialog between the Luna and alpha. Most books done have that they a lot of misconception. I can't wait to see how it end and what they do to her old pack. I can't wait to see how the ex mate is going to act about her current mate.

I absolutely loved the twist after apphia died. At first it was strange skipping 4 years in the second part of the story and going straight to jamila and nicks story that threw me a little at first but if you bare with it everything will become apparent! It's well worth the rest I'm not going into much detail I don't want to ruin the story for other readers just believe me when I say it is well worth it

It's a great story. I love it. Can't wait to see what happens next. It's one of the best novels I've read in a long time. The characters are good and I enjoy the story line. I know that is getting really good, I can't wait for the alpha to find out what really happened to his mate and get revenge on her own pack. They deserve to be taught a lesson about how to treat people. I love this story and I'm all excited about the future of the Marked luna. And there is the problem with the evil shadow that is going to try to take her but I know that the alpha is going to save her and live happily ever after, but they are going to go through some serious things first. I can't wait to see what it's going to happen when it does, I can only guess.

It's just a fun book so far , not much off any life lessons except too much of clinch. Exaggeration of PTSD and the story is dragging and no plot twist. So far it's just a story not much of drama and no much of a story line. It's fun for fantasy lovers and romantic obssessors.hope there are more books with good plot and adventure and exploration of the world of the unknown..I enjoy the super natural stories, they are different and unique.

This was a wonderful love story with sad and happy moments. It starts with tantalizing and heartbreaking moments that draw you into this book. Their trials and suffering lead to a wonderful and prosperous future. Being tested and finding purpose in themselves and each other. Then being granted their greatest desires and rediscovering their love and lives making the lost future together a fulfilled. Great job to the author 👏 👍 👌!!! Your ability to keep readers engaged in this story is impressive.

Wish it didn't have to end I loved it especially the dynamic between Nicholas and Apphia I wish there would have been another little side story about Maximus and his mate and how they ended and everything cuz I would have been a cute little story and really I don't have any other complaints about anything and I'm just trying to make it the minimum 80 word post for I can get my coins I loved it you're a wonderful author thank you for this book