Mated to My Intended's Enemy Reviews

So far, this is one of the most interesting storylines l have read. There are certain grammatical errors, and storyline inconsistencies but nothing that distracts from the actual plot and plot twists. Às a published author, hardback not digital these are things that l take note of that the casual reader probably wouldn't pay much attention to. At this point it is glaringly obvious that Enzo is plotting with the pack who was encroaching upon Leonard's territory hoping to take his silver reserves....however even armed with that knowledge it will be interesting to watch the characters solve their mysteries. I look forward to the story's resolution....and look forward to the author's future work, as l believe she will progress into a very fine writer. She just needs to be more aware of her own consistency.

"Mated to My Intended's Enemy" is a paranormal romance novel that's getting a lot of attention. The story follows Victoria Howlthorne, who's sold her virginity to a stranger to escape her fate as a sex slave. However, this stranger turns out to be the alpha she's already destined to mate. Victoria's life takes a dramatic turn when her half-brother, Enzo, tries to sell her to pay off debts. She's forced into a world of danger and forbidden love. I Love the intense and passionate storyline. It's a bit repetitive, and character development could be stronger. Expect twists and turns that'll keep you hooked. Protagonists have deep emotions and complex relationships. Explicit and intense love scenes.

I like the dynamic between Victoria and Leo and I also like that the novel isn't too much doom and gloom in the beginning. It is an intriguing mix of politics and romance, that being said, it would also have been nice to have a purely romance werewolf novel. I really like the book so far and can recommend it without hesitation. Also at least as the moment the romance between Leo and Victoria isn't as toxic as it sounds on the cover.

It was too boring at the beginning but one I got two thirds in it picked up. I enjoyed it from that point on. I think you should have added a little more excitement to begin to let the reader know something was was causing their separation. This book should have been a part 2 from when the mother and father book. I got confused until I realized it was just a continuation. I enjoyed the book but would have liked more time with them as a couple

Love the intrigue within the story line. Not just the “mated” alpha and their never ending sexual ties. Putting more into the scenario to lift the underdog (abused mate). Allowing her to grow naturally and with that it strengthens her. I love the way the harshness of solitude softens one when coupled with the right partner and to make the other complete strengthens her confidence and abilities. They complement each other, strengthen each other in different ways. It’s a great bond and want to find out how great they end up together. Also the results of the intrigues.

Ok, here we go! Title is nothing like expected to find in this story. There is no Intended's Enemy, but the story of Victoria & Leo although often out of order, timeline/ character name mix ups is reasonably easy to adjust to and plot could have been brilliannt. HOWEVER, Silvano and FREYA's story is terrible, and extremely hard to follow with the constant character and timeline errors. If you are going to do a BOOK 2, of the next ggeneration then introduce the characters lineage correctly & then be constistant. Not recommended if you like good flow, integrity & loyalty.

Silvano thinks he is protecting Freya y keeping her out of what is happening, but what he is doing is actually driving them apart. Freya would have preferred to know what is happening. Aurora is just as snicky as her grandmother. It beats me why she is so close to silvano. Silvano does not Appreciate the genius he married and have relegated her letting people walk over Freya. I am not sure how long Isabella can keep them together if Silvano refuse to show Freya he cares.

I am quite enjoying this novel. I love the fact that he actually respects and cares about her from the beginning. He doesn’t lock her up for her protection but allows her to be a true partner instead of a glorified slave. It is depressing when the mate is unkind in the beginning. There are clear villains in the story. The mean girl aspect is unfortunately accurate no matter your age. Some ladies just be hating. Worth the read so far!

A very captivating read. I love the way Victoria and Leo's relationship is evolving. They have such a great mate bond. Despite Leo's reputation, he is a very caring Alpha that truly appreciate and respects Victoria. Victoria is growing and changing daily into a great Luna. I can't wait to see what happens with Enzo and Lilith. A lot of things going on at the moment with Enzo that keeps you hooked and wanting to keep reading. Can't put the book down at the moment